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Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Man in the Long Black Coat

This is really good, it reminds me of Laurell K. Hamilton's books, with the vampires having the same rights and or being finally adapted into society. Cool idea.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Man in the Long Black Coat

great chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 08:11 am Title: Man in the Long Black Coat

Spike noticed something was off with the body (the symbol, the air smelling like tainted blood). Will Buffy believe him if he tells her? Looking forward to hear what Buffy will ask.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Man in the Long Black Coat

Interesting fic you have here. I like Spike's rationalization of people- "humans certainly weren’t as stupid as they use to be." I hope, for his own sake, he doesn't say that people are happy meals with legs. That would be bad in this town at this time. :-) Anyways, I hope you have good luck with your bum leg.

As for a new title, I admit that a new one would be good, but this one does seem fitting to where this is going. The question is- what do you want the title to say about the fic. I gather, as I'm not a writer, that most fic titles are either things SAID in the fic, or about where the fic will end up. I hope that helps with your decision!

Author's Response: It is a classic Spike quote but I think Spike has enough sense not to say it but hell who knows where this fic could end. The problem with title is though it suits the fic to a certain extent, it sounds kinda like cheap sci-fi thriller bought at an airport... Hehe I just want it sound elequent I'm just being a language snob

Reviewer: riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Man in the Long Black Coat

very good--can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Every Grain Of Sand

So Willow is a consultant.. and Faith works for Willy. And indeed Willy was right to have a nightmare about being killed in that alley. Someone was. And hadn't it been for Spike Willy would have run into the body. And another victim from our killer. Maybe Spike did recognize the sign? He was worried...~ good chapter :)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: Every Grain Of Sand

great chapter

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Date: 04/04/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: Ain't Gonna A-Grieve

great chapter

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 06:36 am Title: Every Grain Of Sand

good so far

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2006 - 10:22 pm Title: Ain't Gonna A-Grieve

Oohhh, this looks like it could be fun... a sort of female version of Jim Butcher's Storm Front, maybe?

I await the next chapter with eagerness.

Author's Response: I did read Storm Front recently, but it's not directly based on that. Not so much magic based as demonic what nots. Wait till Spike make his appearance!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2006 - 09:45 pm Title: Ain't Gonna A-Grieve

I like the start of this one means the first chapter and like the summary. Looking forward to read more :)

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Ain't Gonna A-Grieve

Fantastic start! Sound like this is going to be a real interesting one..Hope you update soon : D

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