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Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2004 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wowee! That was a really amazing scene in the club. Bravo! More please!

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2004 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 4

You are a very good writer. The story development and timing is great. Keep it up and please update soon.

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2004 - 06:08 am Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for making this erotic chapter so more than about the sex...in the hands of a less talented writer...this chapter would not have been as satisfying. I love the way you just let the story, the characters, & their reactions develop naturally. You have me eager for the next chapter...naturally.

Reviewer: Mandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2004 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter 4

They're so hot, yet completely endearing at the same time. I love the charaterization and I love the plot. I love the whole story and how they go back and forth telling it. Superb job!

Reviewer: Angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2004 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 4

excellent story......please keep it coming with more chapters that will keep me on the edge of my seat

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