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Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 11:42 pm Title: Little Girl Trapped

This is a good story, but my one criticism is that you need a beta, the spelling & grammar are bad. Its a shame to spoil a good story with poor english: and when is the "wizard" going to do his wizz thing?

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 12:18 pm Title: Little Girl Trapped

Spike isn't different (man/demon). He's 'good' even with his demon. Angel isn't. I think Buffy is wrong here. She's right that Angel will suffer because for him it's different (two people) too.
Uh-huh bad! Angelus got her. Then she has to fight for her life now. ~ Looking really forward to the next parts!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 02:37 am Title: Little Girl Trapped

Interesting flashback for Spike, look foward to the sword fight.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 10:21 pm Title: Little Girl Trapped

Uh oh Buffy's really in trouble now! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 05:44 pm Title: Little Girl Trapped

Loved it. Go buffy and beat Angelus. Give him a good beating.

Hopefully, Spike gets there soon.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

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