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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

Uh-huh.. well it would have been to easy if Buffy told have everyone. She didn't really lie... she just let Willow believe that Riley is the father of her child. I wonder what trouble that will bring in the future. Till next part!

Author's Response: Yes, she didn't say it was Riley's out right, but sadly the truth will come out sooner or later.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

lovin this. more please

Author's Response: Yay, glad you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

*disbelieving face* Buffy's not gonna tell Willow the truth about the father? Well, what would happen if they found out? And how? *LOL* So many questions.. um... no need to answer them...

Great fic... can't wait for more... :)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying it so far. Yes, so many questions,lol. But all shall be answered, I think. ^_^

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

good update but i wish that she would've told her that it was spikes' and not riley's


Author's Response: Buffy might have a change of heart, we'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

I really like this, so far. I hope that Buffy is honest from the get go that the baby is Spikes .....

Author's Response: Well you know Buffy, but who knows, she could have a change of heart.

Reviewer: Suzanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

Good start, looks like it'll be fun. Just a small suggestion though - I'm not sure if it's a typo or your not being aware of the difference but you're confusing "where" and "were." If it's a typo then you probably need to proofread a bit more closely (I know that's easier said than done since I write myself) but if you don't know the difference then please check the dictionary.

I just put an example below:

The bell over the front door gave a small ding as Anya raised her head. Smiling the former vengeance demon announced; “Welcome to the Magic Box how may I... Oh, it's you, Willow. I though you where someone important, someone with money. Hurry, out of the way, you're blocking the entrance for people who come in here to give me their money.”


It should be "were" someone important.

I'm not trying to be picky or make you feel bad but I noticed it in chapter 1 and again a few places in this chapter and so I thought I'd bring it to your attention because errors like that are very distracting to the reader and take away from your wonderful story.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, and no you're not picky, thanks for the heads up. *hugs* I'm not joking I'm forever typing them "where" and "were" like that. It's like my brain can't keep up with my fingers, and for some reason I always miss it in the read through *sigh* Again thanks! ^_^

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

Oh the start looks really promising :) Looking forward what you have in mind and how the others will take the news.

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you stay with me.

Reviewer: opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

good job gb! i love it.

Author's Response: Thanks Opal, I'm glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

I like it so far! I have a soft spot for fics with babies... esp one with Spike and Buffy being the biological parents. Great writing style, and I can't wait for more! Update soon, ok?

Author's Response: Thanks! I love baby fics too, well spuffy baby fics! Hope to have an update soon.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

great start

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! ^_^

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

a pretty interesting start!! love it and waiting for more!

Author's Response: Why thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

good so far

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 07:28 am Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

i really love your first chapter! definetly reeled me in, i can't wait to read more! please update soon?i can't wait to read spike's reaction, the scoobs or riley's! it's gonna be priceless!!!!!

Author's Response: I just got chapter two back , so I should be updating soon. I'm really glad you enjoyed the first chapter. ^_^

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

Love it! Want more now. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, more soon I hope!

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

Yeah!! Spuffy Baby! My fave kind of story. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: My fav too! Glad you liked the first chappie.

Reviewer: Willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

I really like this - good plot and well writen, looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter One: One Line or Two

great start. looking 4ward to more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! ^_^

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