Very hot story, I am sure we have lots of details yet to be told about William, but the seduction scene is quite good, and making me want to check into that place.....oh yeah ! And thanks

Excuse may language but what, the fuck. I like your story don't get me wrong, but I just can't figure out what is up with William/guy able to clone people. He has a heartbeat, Red eye (which i totally amit creeps me out), ablilty to walk and see through walls, on top of the he gets pissed when Buffy does give in (I'm guessing he likes the vilence in the sex?). Hmmm I guess I'm just going to have to keep on reading to find out what is going on and what the hell he is (other than majorly creepy). You get two thumbs up from me for the scare and creepiness factor. two thumbs for intriguing way to get Buffy and William/what-ever-the-hell-he-is together. But only one thumb for the ability for me to understand what is happening in the story. I hope by the end I'll change that to two thumbs.Wierd story but I like it so far. Update soon

~Chriss~

Author's Response: Sorry this is so frustrating, I like suspense :) Hopefully this next chapter will explain a lot for you. If not, please review and let me know, and I can clarify things further!