Reviews For The Demon Within
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Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Bring on the Rain

Three updates since I've last been by and each one better than the last. This fic is great. I feel so bad for him, but where did everyone else go? Can't wait to see what happens next.

~Diana

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 12:51 am Title: Bring on the Rain

This story is truly heart-breaking, yet. . .enthraling. I love it! It's so completely different from anything I've read in my entire life - truly unique! Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanx! ~Raven~

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 12:28 am Title: Bring on the Rain

VERY interesting!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:14 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Wow. Well the dots aren't all connected yet but there's definitely something tangible starting to form with regards to this mystery. So I wonder...will the effect that Buffy has of making William's heart be the device to (eventually) bring him back to life or will she some how allow him to find rest? And the fact that William's paternity is unknown - will that be resolved and be significant in either how he ended up in limbo or how he escapes it? And what is the connection Buffy and William have? Thoroughly fascinating stuff...more please!

Reviewer: Beautiful Disaster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

This story is innovative. I mean that. This deserves wayyyyy more reviews than it has. Hopefully you'll get more. Can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Great chapter! What happened to her friends??

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

loved the updates ...this story just keeps getting better and better...please keep up the good work

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

First off- can we say WOW!!! for the frequency of your updates! Very good to have some explanations.
I´m very much hooked, can´t wait for your updates.

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

wow..I don't even know what to write,everything is just so , i don't know what it is,but it is something :P...And it's def something good..

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:15 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Ok still not exactly sure what the hell he is but I can live with it the way it is. Like it alot. But where the hell are her friends?

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Hmm..William is somehow an immortal right? and a Warlock? He is somehow tied to this place..but still alot of questions in the air.

Does that mean that he is a living being..could he have a child with Buffy? and WHERE THE HECK IS HER FRIENDS? lol OK..I am the curious one I know. I always have to be in the know..so just ignore me.. : D Looking forward to more!

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