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Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 12:28 am Title: Bring on the Rain

VERY interesting!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:14 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Wow. Well the dots aren't all connected yet but there's definitely something tangible starting to form with regards to this mystery. So I wonder...will the effect that Buffy has of making William's heart be the device to (eventually) bring him back to life or will she some how allow him to find rest? And the fact that William's paternity is unknown - will that be resolved and be significant in either how he ended up in limbo or how he escapes it? And what is the connection Buffy and William have? Thoroughly fascinating stuff...more please!

Reviewer: Beautiful Disaster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

This story is innovative. I mean that. This deserves wayyyyy more reviews than it has. Hopefully you'll get more. Can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Great chapter! What happened to her friends??

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

loved the updates ...this story just keeps getting better and better...please keep up the good work

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

First off- can we say WOW!!! for the frequency of your updates! Very good to have some explanations.
I´m very much hooked, can´t wait for your updates.

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

wow..I don't even know what to write,everything is just so , i don't know what it is,but it is something :P...And it's def something good..

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:15 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Ok still not exactly sure what the hell he is but I can live with it the way it is. Like it alot. But where the hell are her friends?

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: Encounters in the Dark

Ohh a ghost that's completly horny......well well well what is the world coming too ;)

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Hmm..William is somehow an immortal right? and a Warlock? He is somehow tied to this place..but still alot of questions in the air.

Does that mean that he is a living being..could he have a child with Buffy? and WHERE THE HECK IS HER FRIENDS? lol OK..I am the curious one I know. I always have to be in the know..so just ignore me.. : D Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: Frustration

WOW..I am confused. I get what's happening in each scene. I'm just completely confused about what William is.. A ghost? A demon? Vampire? What does he want with Buffy, and where are all her friends now? I am sure that you have us in the dark on purpose for now..but man am I curious! lol REALLY great story..I am definately loving it : D

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 03:07 pm Title: Frustration

Very hot story, I am sure we have lots of details yet to be told about William, but the seduction scene is quite good, and making me want to check into that place.....oh yeah ! And thanks

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: Frustration

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 12:11 pm Title: Frustration

Excuse may language but what, the fuck. I like your story don't get me wrong, but I just can't figure out what is up with William/guy able to clone people. He has a heartbeat, Red eye (which i totally amit creeps me out), ablilty to walk and see through walls, on top of the he gets pissed when Buffy does give in (I'm guessing he likes the vilence in the sex?). Hmmm I guess I'm just going to have to keep on reading to find out what is going on and what the hell he is (other than majorly creepy). You get two thumbs up from me for the scare and creepiness factor. two thumbs for intriguing way to get Buffy and William/what-ever-the-hell-he-is together. But only one thumb for the ability for me to understand what is happening in the story. I hope by the end I'll change that to two thumbs.Wierd story but I like it so far. Update soon

~Chriss~

Author's Response: Sorry this is so frustrating, I like suspense :) Hopefully this next chapter will explain a lot for you. If not, please review and let me know, and I can clarify things further!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 12:10 pm Title: Frustration

This fic reads really well - the imagery you use seriously produces some movie quality pictures in my mind and the whole feel of the piece lends itself to a film I reckon. But tension and anger? He's forcing (okay - this point could be debated) his attentions on Buffy left, right and centre and when she finally appears to respond in an encouraging manner he stalks off all rippling with tension and anger? The question has got to be 'why'. Please update soon...I NEED to get an answer!

Author's Response: thanks! i guess I kind of see this story in my mind as very visual, hence the movie-esque feel. William's character needed to be mysterious, so I had to take my time in developing it. Hope the next few chapters help to sort it all out for you!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:26 am Title: Soon

Very intense, very good, can´t wait for more.

Reviewer: jazz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:17 am Title: Soon

Spooky and strangely erotic! More puh-lease!!!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 06:46 am Title: Soon

Ohh an old fashioned ghost/horror story, now this is probably a first for me reading in spuffy verse. Good start so far.

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 01:57 am Title: Soon

You've definately got the scare factor down... it's so intense, i love it. Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 01:51 am Title: Crossing the Atlantic

I like how you started it and i like this Angel a lot better than all the other Angels people tend to write. It just seems that people like to make him out into a horrible guy right from the beginning, even if he happens to be dating Buffy... and you made him into a normal, good boyfriend, which is really, really refreshing. on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I guess I dont particulary dislike Angel like some do- I just find him a bit on the boring side! It just means that there will be a bit of contrast when things start heating up with Spike

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 12:53 am Title: Soon

good update

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 12:29 am Title: Soon

Man..I just stumbled across this story...and so far I am loving it! I love a good spooky story.. This one really has us guessing : D Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 10:41 pm Title: Soon

Wow that was intense!!! I really liked it!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: Soon

Just came across your fic and love it! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 07:23 pm Title: Soon

ooo...shivers up my spine. this is gonna be good. can't wait for more

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