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Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Ventures

awwww....... tara n willow will be in UK,.... gonna miss them... love the update and waiting for more!!

Author's Response: I promise that they won't be absent from the story, even though they're overseas. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: Ventures

I just love your stories! And I'm SO incredibly happy that you're doing this sequel!! *Hugs* Thank you! Really really good so far, but I didn't doubt that it would be. I'd almost forgotten how much I love Meret! They should have had a Meret on the show, that would have rocked. Again, really good couple of chapter, looking forward to more! I'm on the edge of my seat here! ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the fic. I'm of course biased towards my little coatl, but I'm very flattered that there seems to be quite a bit of Meret-affection going around. Thanks!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Ventures

Buffy seemed almost congenitally incapable of keeping a grudge, much less understanding someone else’s, and so she had run roughshod over Spike’s desire to avoid the mansion, regardless of the potential treasure hidden there. Without realizing it, she was doing the same to her watcher.

One of my big bugbears with the character... her ability to be as flawed as any other human being. That whole paragraph is great observation though, Weyr. Done from Spike's pov though, it did make me wonder if the vampire was ever that deep thinking. It's something that I, as a rabid Spike fan have always aspired him to be, but I'm not sure how close to Joss Whedon's canon that would ever be (not close at all, I'm pretty sure).

All in all, with the Spike-centric narrative focussed on his reactions to Scooby interactions, a very nice, easy on the heart-rate chapter. Loved the dual functionality of Gile's car :- penis-extension and, ...mobile debriefing room ...



Author's Response: Touche. I probably do give Spike more intellectual credit than he is due. Sorry. I'll also endeavor to be a little harder on the heart-rate as the story goes along. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Ventures

Loved the update. Midlife crisis? Cute. Like the Spike Tara relationship. Of course Meret, enjoying the car ride, what can I say? Just love her to pieces.

Author's Response: In a vampire, what would that kind of behavior be called? A midcentury crisis? Proof of unlife behavior? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 03:43 pm Title: Ventures

Spike's musings in the back seat of Giles' mid-life crisis mobile were extremely well written. I especially liked the parallels he drew between himself and Giles. The airport goodbye was also well written, and Spike offering up strands of hair highlighted his trust and friendship with Tara. Another tight chapter filled with lots of detail and excellent characterizations. I missed the oblique "Firefly" reference, though.

Author's Response: I'm afraid that my favorite scene from that 'verse had River sniffing Inara's bed and getting this funny expresion on her face. Oblique, I know, but when I was writing that scene, I had to include it. I'm glad you liked the Spike/Giles comparisons. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Ventures

R&R before; loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 12:48 pm Title: Ventures

I'm so glad your muse saw fit to grace you with a continuation of this tale, I absolutely love your writing.


Author's Response: She's sometimes fickle, but after how much I enjoyed writing the first fic, she was a little more willing this time around. ;-) Thank you!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 12:12 pm Title: Ventures

Enjoying the story.

Not to bring up the "T" word... glad you came out ok.

Author's Response: Thanks on both counts. Scary stuff, but at least everyone I know got through it okay.

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