Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:03 am Title: The White
Meret is more than it seems (in the dream world she's human again, a warrior).
But all three warriors stood well in the fight. Elaine didn't make it easy.
Neat :) The gods came to help again (and they knew the way back too).
Elaine is really gone now? Well if she'll meet Mictlantechutli again that didn't help her then *g*.
Good to see (read) the update :)) Loved it.
Author's Response: Easy fights are boring fights. However, non-easy fights are hard to write! And yeah, tossing herself on Micty's plate was pretty dumb. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:33 am Title: The White
It's very good to see more of this, and hurrah! for Giles being rescued.
Author's Response: Thanks! (And was there ever any doubt?)
Date: 01/20/2007 - 07:59 pm Title: The White
Very very cool climax. Really, superb story, this! Glad you updated!
Author's Response: Thank you! No more huge lags between chapters, I promise!
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:51 pm Title: The White
"Undead and crazy-angry apparently equaled more psychic fortitude than undead and ADHD" LOL! You really are the wittiest writer I've ever read! This chapter was excellent!
cheers
mikim
Author's Response: Hee! Thank you very much!
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:48 am Title: The White
I was so happy to see this updated when I checked today! I have been waiting for this fic to continue and was not disappointed at all, keep up the great writing.
Author's Response: Whew! I should be all in the clear for the final chapters, and I'm glad this one lived up to expectations. Thanks!
Date: 01/20/2007 - 12:57 am Title: The White
This chapter was well worth the wait. You painted a striking picture of Meret's human form, and Buffy's reaction to her state of undress was a delight. This was another vivid action sequence, and the description of Elaine's physical state was especially rich. I love the easy humor between Spike and Mictlantechutli , and this line could have come out of either one of them: "I had wished to get at least one good bite in."
Now that the spell is broken and Giles is back to rights, what other loose ends are there to tie up? I can't wait to find out. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Um, two chapters' worth of loose ends? Yeah, that's not a real answer... Sorry. I've really enjoyed developing Mictlantechutli's character and playing with his dynamic with Spike. I'm happy you guys are liking him too. Thanks!