Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:13 am Title: Doubtless
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW. After so long, finally. And it's perfect, even if Xander did try to ruin it. ;) Great stuff!
Author's Response: Xander's good that way. ;-) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
Date: 01/24/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: Doubtless
*grins* yeah, in a perfect world there would have been Buffy when he woke up. Spike on espressos? Would have loved to see him. I guess he didn't sleep much. ;-)
AWEEEE :) Loved the scene that was the end of the chapter. Spike going through the motions and Buffy having problems to explain herself. But she made up for it :))
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked how I resolved their UST tango. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/23/2007 - 04:00 pm Title: Doubtless
Buffy finally just taking what she wants, showing Spike that she does care, was a delightful surprise. I thought the attraction and UST would be dragged out forever, the tension had been such a lovely read.
This entire chapter was richly detailed, and I especially liked your description of Spike's post-spell lassitude.
I really liked this line: "The line between coyness and cowardice was as thin as a razor." And the energy in this one: "Nothing mattered, except him and her and the sparking, living thing that was between them."
Only one more chapter? Shoot. I've really enjoyed this story and the cameraderie you've built between all the characters. The interweaving of the mythologies has been a delight. I hope you have plans to continue this series. Dawn's scavenger hunts have been lots of fun, and I love Meret.
Author's Response: The UST had to get resolved eventually, or else Spike's head would have exploded all over the place. Or maybe it was my head at the hands of irate readers... I'm not sure. :-D
I'm fully intending on returning to this 'verse, if that helps any. Thank you for the fantastic feedback!
Date: 01/23/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Doubtless
Great endinging to a great chapter!!!!
This is a wonderful story to read!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/23/2007 - 11:46 am Title: Doubtless
Whee!!! Quasi-smut! More, please.
Author's Response: Hmm, can't wait what you have to say about the last chapter. ;-) Thanks!
Date: 01/23/2007 - 06:30 am Title: Doubtless
(Insert sigh here.) Thank you. Really love the second to last line.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:22 am Title: Doubtless
::beams::
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks!