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Reviewer: fallen_angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 10:08 am Title: The Juniper Tree

Oh yes, very nice end to the chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 06:53 am Title: The Juniper Tree

Oh, masterfully done. Great kiss. *claps*

And, I love Meret. I hope Buffy can keep her promise.

Author's Response: We'll see! And I might, MIGHT, put more kisses in later. Maybe. If I get enough chocolate. ;-) Thanks!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 01:43 am Title: The Juniper Tree

What a well woven chapter. Love the breakfast interaction. Meret is priceless, unique and such an asset to this story.

And you gave us a KISS. Thank you !!

Author's Response: Yup, a kiss... In a WeyrWolfen story... What is the world coming to? ;-) Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you guys are still loving Meret. She's so much fun to write!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 01:08 am Title: The Juniper Tree

Lovely. Plus, I love when Buffy busts around (usually half-cocked).

Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, Buffy acting cool and rational wouldn't be half as much fun to write!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: The Juniper Tree

Awe, sleepy growly Spike with bed hair? CUTE :) Look there.. Buffy thought of letting Spike have blood for the pancakes like maple syrup :) Thoughtful indeed. And a nice way to spent the time for breakfast.
Meret is thoughtful too; seems she doesn't trust Willow or it's because of Spike's opinion on Willow.
Dawn knew more about the background.. So they have to check the locations now where it can take place. Good that Meret offered to come when Buffy wanted to go alone :)

Author's Response: And calling him cute would make him growl more, which would make him more cute, which would... Ah! Fangirl vortex! Ahem... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: The Juniper Tree

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: The Juniper Tree

Well done :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: The Juniper Tree

I enjoyed the bait and switch of Spike waking up to the sound of Buffy's voice and surrounded by warmth. Nice bit with the electric blanket! The exposition was kept entertaining by all the activity going on in the kitchen. I'm looking forward to the results of Buffy and Meret's quest.

I loved this line: "He was trapped, as surely as if caught in a spell: too much sun on one side, and too much logic on the other."

Author's Response: Whew, chatty chapters can be really hard! I'm glad you liked this one. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 03:17 pm Title: The Juniper Tree

Oh, oh! She kissed him, she finally did! *does happy dance* Wonderful chapter, I don't think I had heard about The Juniper Tree, or maybe I had in Spanish. I'm looking forward to what's coming next. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't put it off forever or else my story would just end with Spike exploding. Funny, but not very satisfying otherwise.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 02:44 pm Title: The Juniper Tree

I got caught up and forgot to breathe with this one. You stinker! You just slipped this chapter in here without warning...good thing I was still online and checking...gotta love insomnia.

Willow's rambling was perfect, Tara's level-headedness always present...Spike ready to face the grim truth before others like usual. Buffy's squickyness....and Dawn just joining right in and filling out what hadn't been told, just like the smart-ass teen should be.

And I love Meret!!

Author's Response: Hee! Stealth chapter posting! I'm glad you liked it, in spite of the insomnia! Thanks!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 06:32 pm Title: Connecting the Dots

I really like your characterization of Willow, and Spike's distrust of her. It's original and very true to life. Great update, can't wait for the rest of this.

Author's Response: She got off too easily, even before she skinned Warren. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 03:21 am Title: Connecting the Dots

Again, thank you for spinning a good yarn. There is so much more to your stories than the same ol', same ol'. I like that you do things differently--your own way. I await your next installment with baited breath.

Author's Response: You really know how to make a girl blush. I know its kind of silly to worry about my fanfic being too derivitive (because hello, fanfic!), but I do. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Connecting the Dots

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 05:42 pm Title: Connecting the Dots

*grins* I'm wondering if someone will ask Spike which car he took.
Proto-Germanic.. that fits with the The Juniper Tree from the Brothers Grimm. I didn't see it when I first read the chapter. I was too busy reading and start anew to write a comment now.
So Willow is still on her black and white sight of things..
And Willow's words had struck a nerve with Spike because he tries and tries and wants Buffy to see him. I think she started to do it now.
Tara had the explanation for it. So Willow doesn't like the mirror that Spike is for her in not trusting her completely and reminding her what she has done. ~ Wow a cauldron? Very big to steal it. I just went and read the English and the German version of this very tale. I read it before but it is not very familiar for me. I wonder how it is connected; because of *nods* resurrection! Including deadly revenge of the one that killed the son. So it fits indeed. *necromancers!*

Author's Response: Grimm's fairy tales are so freaky! Glad you're liking the interpersonal stuff too. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 02:49 pm Title: Connecting the Dots

Willow's hinkiness around Spike was well described, and I especially like the phrase "...power harnessed with precious little restraint." Tara concisely put Willow in perspective, and it's a bit disconcerting that Willow's so wary because she can't control Spike or Meret through magic...that means she can control the rest of the group if she pleases. The initial bit with Spike returning Harris' keys was sharply written, and his plans to make up for the theft made me laugh.

Author's Response: You can eat (cast) anything you want except for that one apple (spell). And yeah, Spike is growing a conscience, but it's still kind of funky. ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: Buried Deep

Lol Spike's thoughts are running wild in his head (when he should driving) ;-) He should have a little faith in Buffy. And if Buffy has eyes she sees that he was lying *gg* So he has nothing, huh? ;-)
Uh-huh.. Meret discovered something and it wasn't good: Thirteen necromancer? Things will get tough. ~ Loved the description of Spike's rebirth :) And the update; till next chapter then!

Author's Response: Yeah, he probbly shouldn't be behind the wheel. DWO - driving while obsessed. ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Zoya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 12:40 pm Title: Buried Deep

Just read all of the prequel and this straight through, loved every bit! I gotta say, I love the McCaffrey influence, I read those books too ;) Keep up the great work, I'll be waiting impatiently for your updates!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I love dragons, and as far as I'm concerned, McCaffrey is the master at writing them.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Buried Deep

I've had to catch up on your story in the last few days. I don't know if I missed something about the impending doom--I assume--but I can't imagine necromancers and vampires getting on well together. This could be bad. Great writing! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Control over the dead, dead but animate corpses, yup nothing good. ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Buried Deep

Love Spike's inner monologue (sp? tired here) He is such a hopeless romantic ... That's only one of the 4,576 reasons to adore Spike. And your ever-so-subtle injection of humor here and there is perfect.

Brilliant building of their bonding, albiet over their mutual experience of digging out of coffins buried 6 feet under. Hey ... I am going to FIND every little scrap of potential Buffy/Spike romance/bonding in this story of yours and stitch those scraps into a warm little Spuffy quilt.

You are a 10 on the adventure meter. And a 10 on the intelligently written dialogue as well as wit, humor and creativity. As far as romance ... remains to be seen. (arr arr) kidding aside ... Gotta tell you though .... you are one hell of a writer. Looking forward to your next chapter with anticipation as always.

Thanks again for sharing your talent.

Author's Response: You only have 4,576 reasons? And make your quilt, because I know I am. I'm just really slow. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 02:25 am Title: Buried Deep

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 01:36 am Title: Buried Deep

Spike's deep thoughts about the interrupted kiss were hardly obsessive at all! Thirteen missing necromancers? Cue creepy organ music here. I enjoyed all the detail in Spike's introduction to his new life, and his understanding that his journey from the grave was nothing like Buffy's. The two of them bonding while detecting is making for a lot of quiet time in close quarters. This was another well written, tight chapter.

Author's Response: Spike? Obsess about Buffy-kisses? Never! ;-) Then again, Spike being introspective, especially about his past, is always fun to write. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 06:19 am Title: Magnetism

Still really hooked on your story. So close...so close.

Author's Response: Hee, I have to torture you guys a little bit. ;-) Glad you're liking it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: Magnetism

Buffy's agitation came of the page in waves, right up to the quiet, romantic scene on the back porch. Dawn's entrance was pure slapstick, and I love Meret angrily chasing her back inside.

Author's Response: Meret's pretty fun to write as the voice of reason, especially since she can't talk. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 04:03 pm Title: Telepathosis

Another tight, entertaining chapter. Tara's frantic tale distracting Spike into a rose bush was funny, as was Dawn's hair. Even with all that, there was a sense of urgency throughout the chapter. I love the idea of the enchanted mirror.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad my bizarro humor isn't undermining the overarching plot. I sometimes wonder considering my penchant for birdwalking.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 03:31 pm Title: Something Old, Something Rotten

This chapter was rife with funny images and vivid details. Spike providing a riding crop as Buffy's "weapon" and Anya's line about "ineffective sex games" made me laugh out loud. Spike's search of Giles' apartment beautifully balanced humor and suspense. Spike testing the flask's contents for tampering made me smile, and Meret's "He fades" sent a shiver up my spine. Lovely job with this chapter. I was on vacation when you posted, so now I'm off to read the latest two as well, what a treat.

Author's Response: Welcome back! I don't know why I've been feeling like goofing around, but I'm glad the humor is appreciated. Thanks!

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