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Date: 01/31/2007 - 06:49 am Title: Dancing Lessons

i love it, keep it comin

Author's Response: :-) Will do.

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Date: 01/31/2007 - 06:34 am Title: A Skeleton in the Basement

interedting start

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Date: 01/30/2007 - 06:30 pm Title: Unexpected Blessings

I love the sequel it's realy good. well done

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 02:59 am Title: Unexpected Blessings

This story was awesome! I loved it! I was happy to see you're going to revisit this particular series. I think Buffy and Spike deserve some more one-on-one time with eachoter in black and white ;) Not to mention the michief the little coatls are going to get into!! Can't wait for your next one.

Author's Response: Thank you! Black and white, huh? We'll see. ;-) I'm glad you're liking the stories!

Reviewer: isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 09:44 pm Title: Unexpected Blessings

I think you did a very good job with this story. I hope you're not done writing even if you want to leave Meret's story alone for a while.

I look forward to reading more

Author's Response: Oh, no. Not done with writing. I've just got a fully grown, particularly obnoxious plot bunny on my tail that wants to be written next. I'll be revisiting Meret and crew when that one's done. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 01:24 pm Title: Unexpected Blessings

Xander is married now? They stopped the problems in time then. :)
Mictlantechutli is visiting Spike again? I wonder if he has a reason to do. ~ *g* And Spike is drinking his xocolatl after all, huh? If it was Mictlantechutli's remark? *g*
Mmmh Mictlantechutli's little sister? Is someone pregnant? Ah :) Merrit. Then the "Child of Life should get one" makes sense. Loved Joyce threat :))
Loved it! That includes the whole story. And the best news are that you're planning to visit this 'Verse again :-D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my long, strange ride. I'll be writing more in this, just not next. Thanks!

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 04:25 am Title: Unexpected Blessings

Awww. And yay! I kind of suspected, what with Meret being ravenous in the last chapter... wow, three more coatls? The talking in everyone's head is gonna get nuts!

Love them all sweet together, too.

Author's Response: Yeah, I telegraphed that one like mad. :-D Three mini-Meret's is going to cause all kinds of lovely chaos, so no end to this series in the forseeable future. Thanks!

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: Unexpected Blessings

Loved it, loved it, loved it! I'm happy to know what happened but sad to see it end. Meret is one of my favorite original characters! And giving Buffy an egg was absolutely precious. Loved that scene. Great fic! Absolutely great!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be picking this 'verse back up after I write my next fic, so it's not really the end. I'm glad you liked this one (and Meret) so much!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 05:55 pm Title: Unexpected Blessings

What a wonderful chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 03:52 pm Title: Unexpected Blessings

What a wonderful ending to this entertaining adventure. I loved Spike's observation " There were a lot of times, like this one, when Spike thought that maybe he had never awakened after killing Maclin, and that his body was lying in withering stasis somewhere, dreaming away. Buffy was more relaxed, dare he say more happy, than she had been since her resurrection. Even with their rough patches, Spike was completely enthralled by the open, playful passion she had brought into his unlife. She had ensnared him, body and absent soul, so thoroughly that it seemed impossible that this wasn’t a dream. Then again, he seriously doubted his subconscious mind’s ability to come up with the ridiculous events of the last few months. Even he wasn’t that insane." This highlighted what a peaceful, happy state you've left them both in. The road to it has been a wonderful read.

I'm delighted there's more to come, and the addition of three more coatls (whatever the plural of coatl is) is going to be a lot of fun. Thanks for taking the time to do these characters justice, and for putting them through their paces with such intricate plotting and attention to detail.

Author's Response: I'm going to be running with coatls, so uh, artistic license if it ends up being coatlae or something weird like that. And thank you thank you about the last comment in particular. That really means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:13 am Title: Doubtless

AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW. After so long, finally. And it's perfect, even if Xander did try to ruin it. ;) Great stuff!

Author's Response: Xander's good that way. ;-) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: Doubtless

*grins* yeah, in a perfect world there would have been Buffy when he woke up. Spike on espressos? Would have loved to see him. I guess he didn't sleep much. ;-)
AWEEEE :) Loved the scene that was the end of the chapter. Spike going through the motions and Buffy having problems to explain herself. But she made up for it :))

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked how I resolved their UST tango. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 04:00 pm Title: Doubtless

Buffy finally just taking what she wants, showing Spike that she does care, was a delightful surprise. I thought the attraction and UST would be dragged out forever, the tension had been such a lovely read.

This entire chapter was richly detailed, and I especially liked your description of Spike's post-spell lassitude.

I really liked this line: "The line between coyness and cowardice was as thin as a razor." And the energy in this one: "Nothing mattered, except him and her and the sparking, living thing that was between them."

Only one more chapter? Shoot. I've really enjoyed this story and the cameraderie you've built between all the characters. The interweaving of the mythologies has been a delight. I hope you have plans to continue this series. Dawn's scavenger hunts have been lots of fun, and I love Meret.

Author's Response: The UST had to get resolved eventually, or else Spike's head would have exploded all over the place. Or maybe it was my head at the hands of irate readers... I'm not sure. :-D I'm fully intending on returning to this 'verse, if that helps any. Thank you for the fantastic feedback!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Doubtless

Great endinging to a great chapter!!!!
This is a wonderful story to read!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 11:46 am Title: Doubtless

Whee!!! Quasi-smut! More, please.

Author's Response: Hmm, can't wait what you have to say about the last chapter. ;-) Thanks!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 06:30 am Title: Doubtless

(Insert sigh here.) Thank you. Really love the second to last line.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:22 am Title: Doubtless

::beams::

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:03 am Title: The White

Meret is more than it seems (in the dream world she's human again, a warrior).
But all three warriors stood well in the fight. Elaine didn't make it easy.
Neat :) The gods came to help again (and they knew the way back too).
Elaine is really gone now? Well if she'll meet Mictlantechutli again that didn't help her then *g*.
Good to see (read) the update :)) Loved it.

Author's Response: Easy fights are boring fights. However, non-easy fights are hard to write! And yeah, tossing herself on Micty's plate was pretty dumb. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:33 am Title: The White

It's very good to see more of this, and hurrah! for Giles being rescued.

Author's Response: Thanks! (And was there ever any doubt?)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 07:59 pm Title: The White

Very very cool climax. Really, superb story, this! Glad you updated!

Author's Response: Thank you! No more huge lags between chapters, I promise!

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:51 pm Title: The White

"Undead and crazy-angry apparently equaled more psychic fortitude than undead and ADHD" LOL! You really are the wittiest writer I've ever read! This chapter was excellent!
cheers
mikim

Author's Response: Hee! Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:48 am Title: The White

I was so happy to see this updated when I checked today! I have been waiting for this fic to continue and was not disappointed at all, keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: Whew! I should be all in the clear for the final chapters, and I'm glad this one lived up to expectations. Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 12:57 am Title: The White

This chapter was well worth the wait. You painted a striking picture of Meret's human form, and Buffy's reaction to her state of undress was a delight. This was another vivid action sequence, and the description of Elaine's physical state was especially rich. I love the easy humor between Spike and Mictlantechutli , and this line could have come out of either one of them: "I had wished to get at least one good bite in."

Now that the spell is broken and Giles is back to rights, what other loose ends are there to tie up? I can't wait to find out. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Um, two chapters' worth of loose ends? Yeah, that's not a real answer... Sorry. I've really enjoyed developing Mictlantechutli's character and playing with his dynamic with Spike. I'm happy you guys are liking him too. Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: Circles

The vivid detail in the preparation and casting of the spell made the action come alive, and the humor peppered throughout the chapter helped keep the exposition from dragging. I laughed at the image of Spike's struggle to keep Giles' lolling head off his shoulder. Xander referring to Angel as a "drama vamp" also made me giggle. This was another tight, entertaining chapter, and I'm looking forward to the results of the spell.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's sometimes hard, but always challenging to keep what is basically a bunch of people sitting in one room interesting. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: Circles

Mmm the actions starts (means everybody gets busy for the spell).
And Spike was right about stealing the stone *gg*
So there is a binding of Buffy and Spike, in some way, and the spell started. Looking forward to read how it worked :-D Loved it.

Author's Response: Whew. After my long, long, long absence, you'll get to see the results of that spell. I hope you like it. Thanks for reviewing!

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