Date: 04/27/2006 - 12:59 am Title: One
WOW... love the startof this story. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: There should be more coming soon. RL got in the way but I should be able to cram some writing time in soon. Thanks for the review;)
Date: 04/23/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: One
good so far
Author's Response: Thanks;) More to come soon....hopefully
Date: 04/23/2006 - 10:11 pm Title: One
What a great beginning. It got me hooked right away. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I will update soon, hopefully, RL is a bitch but I should be able to update sometimes this week;)
Date: 04/23/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: One
I like the start. I would love to read more and find out what you have in mind for this story :)
Author's Response: oh you will find out.....;) thanks;)
Date: 04/23/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: One
i'm really feeling this story..i can't wait for the nest update..i hope it's soon because i just lovedthe start..N
Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as I can, promise!!!!! and since youre my first review ever, and a good one at that, I just can't thank you enough;)!!!
Date: 04/23/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: One
Good start! I know what I did with this concept. Can't wait to see what you do with it! Good job.
Author's Response: I kept trying to read this story and since no one wrote it....well I decided I was te best one for the job.... thanks so much for the review;)
Date: 04/23/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: One
Wow, Awesome. Awesome. Awesome!!! This sounds like it's gonna be an interesting story.
Author's Response: lol, you're just saying because you got a thank you in the author's note;))))) thanks!!
Date: 04/23/2006 - 07:09 pm Title: One
Gotta be honest, there are SO many stories with this similiar plot idea, that I'm a bit skeptical about how you'll make it your own. But this is a good start and I'm looking forward to more.
Please don't take this as a negative review, this is not my intention. I'm just reminding you that you have a lot of competition out there with this plot, but like I said, you have a very promising start here.
I think I'm gonna stop before I babble myself into a corner, lol!
Author's Response: I am not insulted, I know this is a common plot, but I kept hoping to find this story and one day I realized that since no one had written it yet, I should just cut the crap and do it myself;) thanks;)
Date: 04/23/2006 - 06:55 pm Title: One
ooh riveting! more please :D
Author's Response: lol ;) more is coming and a good review by a writer I love is a good way to push my muse ;) Thanks tam;)