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Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 09:37 am Title: Chapter IV

I couldn´t wait till you post this on Indi´s page. So I read this one here and give a comment. I´m happy that you understand everything. This story is so interesting. I couldn´t wait. There was no way.

I loved how Joyce made Buffy go to Giles to get Spike out of there. And than Giles only did it when he gets his only "bodyguard". But for God´s sake spike knows that he can fight demons at least. But I laughed so loud as he tried to fight Buffy and didn´t recongnize that he only can hurt demons, that was great.

I think this whole desk-thing is great. And it´s even better that both of them sign the letter with their real names. William (he didn´t had an other name at that time) and Elizabeth.

Want more... definitly. Hope you update soon.

hugs Caro

Author's Response: Oh, Caro, I can't begin to tell you how happy it makes Lu and I that you were so eager to read the rest of our story. :D

Hee, Joyce is going to be a very valuable asset in the story. We're enjoying writing her so much. :D I'm glad you liked that part with Spike not realizing he could only hurt demons. ;)

Thank you so much for reviewing, Caro and this week you will have an earlier update. ;)

hugs, Mari

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter IV

Awesome, I'm in love myself here. Can't wait till you post again. More William please? I love how you're developing his character, so cute, so hopeful, so HOT.

Author's Response: Aww, you're too sweet, thank you! We're very glad you're liking William that much, you'll see more of him in the story, we promise. :D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter IV

Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter IV

Jeez, he's not the sharpest tool, is he? I can't believe it took him that long to figure out that he could hurt demons...lol! It came to him pretty quickly on the show and he didn't even think about the fact that maybe the chip just stopped working. It was mean of Buffy to tease him, though. Okay, maybe only a little. We'll see how much longer they can hide their feelings for each other. I like that William got the letter and decided to write back to her. I wonder if this will change Spike's memories at all or anything. It probably would have been easier if she didn't put Elizabeth, but what's the fun in things being easy? I still don't know where anyone got the idea that Buffy was a nickname for Elizabeth. I never heard that before and I'm pretty sure it was never mentioned on the show, unless I happened to miss something. Oh well, great chapter! Can't wait for more=)

Author's Response: Well, we figured after 2 zaps with the chip, it wouldn't be that easy for him to go past the headache to figure things that easily. ;) ...Hmm, you'll find out what will happen with Spike's memories soon.

About Elizabeth, it just felt right. She was responding to a romantic letter from a 1880 gentleman, signing it Buffy wouldn't have made the same impact. ;)

And more will come soon. ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter IV

*gg* Seems both Buffy and Spike are effected from their nearness :) Oh, and William found the letter *grins* he must be a bit bewildered because of the date. And is writing back :) ~ Oh and Spike found out the hard way that he can kill demons; well at last Buffy told him *grins*. I love the banner btw :) It fits.

Author's Response: *lol* Yes, they sure are affected by each other. :D Hee, poor Spikey, but it was fun to write that part.

Thank you so much for your comment. :D

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter IV

I really enjoyed reading Spike and Buffy's thoughts throughout the chapter. The way Spike and Buffy are fighting their attraction to each other is really fun. Loved William's appearance in the chapter. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! We're very happy you liked their thoughts, it was fun to write them. :D

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