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Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: chapter 3

Well just as i suspected....later Dawn, HELLO MOMMMY!!!!!! LOL! Well I think Dawn better start worring about her mom turning Will's head rather than the guys on the street, don't you think? I am really getting into this fic and I cna't wait for an update, Kuddos!

Author's Response: hey, all our conversations made for a good fic.

Reviewer: Jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 09:31 am Title: chapter 3

This is a good start and definetely a good premise for the story. My only problem is that it all seems to formal. It's written primarily in very formal english, it would be nice to have it a bit more casual, it makes it seem more real.

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments

Reviewer: spikeshunny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 05:56 am Title: chapter 3

Oh i'm liking this V.

Can't wait for you to update. Would you like me to make you a banner or may i just suprise you ?

K

Author's Response: If you have time I'd love it but you may want to wait a few more chapters to see what others are in here or email on the side.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 02:27 am Title: chapter 3

Oh, now I feel a little bad about wanting Will to get with Buffy already! Ha, oh well. I'm sure this will be an excellently crafted work, and I trust your judgement completely. More, ASAP!

Author's Response: Thanks and have patience it will all work out.

Reviewer: ugh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: chapter 3

i tried to read this, but i just can't get into it. it's just too wrong and disturbing for me. he's 40 for crying out loud, not to mention the fact that he was her teacher. i don't know why he can't just date someone his own age and even if he does end up with buffy, going from the daughter to the mother is just too jerry springer for me. and just that one spawn kiss is making me gag, sorry, really don't think i can continue.

Author's Response: sorry it made you gag. There are plenty more spuffy fics for you to read out there.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 08:16 pm Title: chapter 3

good story! but dawn and spike just eww! hope they have not been groiny. also hope dawn does not get hurt when buffy and will get together. cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Don't worry about Dawn, she will be well taken care of :)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: chapter 3

As much as I like spuffy I can't help but feel that stealing your daughters boyfriend is just....wll rude :)

Author's Response: It is rude and she is bad but so is Dawn. You'll have to wait and see if you are still interested

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: chapter 3

How old is Will? I think you had something bout him being 21 years older, so that 40? If so, he's a year older than her own mom!?! Wow...
Update soon!

Author's Response: He is a year older than her mom. Very common now a adays for older men to date women that could be their daughters.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 05:12 pm Title: chapter 3

Well what can I say but Buffy has to be the crappest parent on the planet. I mean your nineteen year old daughter brings home her 39 year old ex teacher boyfriend, and all you think is he's hot. I mean come on he's practicaly a pervert. You'd have him pinned against the wall by his bollocks. No offense but she's still a kid, it's only when you've been nineteen going on forty, that you know how young that is. You'd flip. For this to be more believeable there has got to be more concern over Dawns emotional needs, by her mother. Bugger the grades. You've already indicated that she's not as mature as Will thought, but her mum should know that. It's a challenging subject, but you're gonna need to work harder to make it work.

Author's Response: Well I am trying to convey my dislike of older men/younger women relationships. I am over 40 and we would flip if our girls brought home guys that age. Remember though, Dawn lost her father when she was young and may be looking for that father figure.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: chapter 3

I just skipped the chapter... I can read it :)

For me? Loved the internal connection at first sight of the electrical kind. Now back home with her mom it seems that Dawn is acting more child like indeed. Thank god William noticed it. Apparently he didn't fall for Dawn's mind.. more for her good looks. (Because Dawn wasn't able to keep track with the talk Buffy and William had had.) And William didn't kiss Dawn on the lips. Seems he did feel a bit awkward. First sign of the end I hope. (Even if I had no problem to read the chapter the whole Spawn thing puts me off *shudder* Sorry, but for me it's just simply wrong. But whoever wants to read the pairing, they shall feel free to read it. I'll try the next chapter again till I come to a point where I have to wait how it ends. I'm still unsure how it can and in a good way the is not awkward. We'll see.)

Author's Response: Thanks for still reading and it is the beginning of the end. Dawn will revert to a minor character for a while.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: chapter 3

Can't help but wonder what Will is thinking from his end ..lol..

Funny how Dawn reverts to her little girl, whinny persona when around her Mom..Not exactly a turn on for the much older professor. (Well maybe for some sicko types it would be) Bet one of the things that attracted Will to Dawn was her maturity. hmmm.. Loving this story!

Author's Response: Thank you. It's the beginning of the end. Hehe

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 02:49 pm Title: chapter 3

Hmm..what IS that about Will? LOL

Author's Response: Hey you write about it too. LOL

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