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Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: chapter 4

So Will's gonna try to use his art to win Buffy over huh, LOL! I can't wait to see where you take this sweetie! GREAT Job! Kuddos!

Author's Response: Thanks that means a lot.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2006 - 12:00 pm Title: chapter 4

LOVE the story!!! (just please dont let Will cheat on Dawn!!! let him break up with her first or her with him!!)


Author's Response: You will have to wait and see what will happen but thanks for reading and reviewing. It makes me very happy.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: chapter 4

I checked it out; I can read this chapter :) I hope it stays this way and if not (*points to last review*) ~ Loved the way Buffy greeted Spike (falling in his arms). As to the pairing with Dawn: I bet most people like Tara did will react the same way, don't believe because of the age difference that he Dawn's boyfriend.. (But it's mostly the Dawn part that I don't like I think you guessed). Tara noticed the connection. I wonder how long it will take Spike to see Dawn with other eyes. Hopefully not too long. He didn't even share his paintings. *shakes head* That doesn't fit for a relationship. Like keeping secrets.. but even better for the not working of this relationship. As I read just before a previous story: it's a matter of trust.. And Spike seems to have little, very little in Dawn if I start to count what is doesn't tell. I still fail to see how it can end well. Not for the Spuffy part (they are 'clicking') but for Dawn being Spike's girlfriend.

Author's Response: It's a lot about trust and not having anything in common with someone over 20 years younger then yourself. I'm just trying to show how older women are fun and sexy too. Thanks for sticking with this.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 08:12 pm Title: chapter 4

Despite Buffy becoming a bit flustered at Will catching her..one obvious thing stood out in this chapter.... There is an awful lot of information about Will that he kept from Dawn..The painting..the old college name..and a whole room that he wouldn't let her into even before he knew how she felt about art. Not a great start to any relationship that would ever work anyway..

Watching the attraction unfold between Will and Buffy will be interesting. I have 3 kids, two of them daughters. For me, a big part of the story will be how this is going to affect the Mother daughter relationship. I am just guessing that Buffy will be in a bit of denial or at least very reluctant to take any "action" on her feelings.. Well, I will can't wait to see how it all comes about eventually. : D

Author's Response: Mom of two teen daughters here so part of this was written with my daughters in mind. There better not date a guy their dad's age that's all I am saying. There will be some tension but that is all I can say for now.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: chapter 4

If Tara's right, which I feel she is, what's gonna happen to Dawn? It can't end well. Your daughter's ex becomes your boyfriend? Not too great for the mother and daughter it seems!
Update soon please!

Author's Response: Dawn will be well taken care of and that's all I am saying for now.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: chapter 4

Sure is interesting. I hope you make it a nice clean break between Spike and Dawn. Is she more grown up away from home? I got that impression in the last chapter.

Author's Response: Dawn tends to revert to the whiny child when she is around her mom. Let's hope she was more mature around Will before. Hehe

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 07:39 pm Title: chapter 4

So glad to see an update! :) So...wonder how Dawn is going to feel about this....

Author's Response: It will be a while before she finds out.

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