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Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: chapter 13

As if Buffy could ever resist him ;)

Well When you said you were moving thing s along you ment it huh, LOL! Well I'm gonna keep this review short and sweet so I can get to the good stuff ;). I know, I know, I'm such a smut addict *winks*

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 04:45 am Title: chapter 13

I thought I knew the meaning of evil, but this brings it to whole new levels! Come on, update again! Now please! I'm dying here, and I'm sure I'm not the only one!

Author's Response: Updated now.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 09:45 pm Title: chapter 13

Mmm Spuffy :) Even if Dawn has a new boyfriend now and she was the one that broke up with Will, it still will be awkward if she finds out that her ex-boyfriend will be her new step-daddy. Awkward *nods*; it would be so even if not Dawn was Buffy's daughter, if Willow was it or so. I wonder how Dawn will react towards both. And how it will be in the future if they are seeing one another often; Dawn her mom with her ex. But yay for Spuffy :)

Author's Response: Yay for Spuffy from me too. It will be awhile before they need to deal with it but it will occur.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: chapter 13

Uh-oh...I mean, yay! but uh oh...she's going to feel so guilty after isn't she? Or will he convince her? And how is Dawn going to react? That'll be a tricky situation. "HI, this is my mom's boyfriend, but he was my boyfriend first." LOL. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: It will be a while before the confrontation.

Reviewer: daffodil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: chapter 13

I think that the plot is intriguing, but the way you write could be brushed up a little. The narrative doesn't flow, and the dialogue doesn't really sound realistic.

Author's Response: Well since this is only my second fic I know I have a lot to learn still about writing.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: chapter 13

Now, I like this couple MUCH better! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will try to update tomorrow.

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