Date: 07/22/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
OK, now I love Hilda ... now that I know she is cool and will not be a love interest of Spike. The Professor is well developed also. You have a great imagination and leave no gaps in logistics. I never have to reread your work in order to figure things out ... everything really flows. Keep on rockin' !!!!
Date: 07/22/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 20
A lot of action in this chapter.. and Buffy lost her shoes. Too bad the vamps organized to have the Professor killed. But good reaction from the Professor when they were attacked. And Buffy found the way home :) And didn't like Spike getting attacked. Possessive much :) Now I hope the talk will go well.
Date: 07/22/2006 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 20
Yes, indeed...the object of Spike's affection is a very lucky girl.
Date: 07/22/2006 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Please update soon. The clifhanger was very interresting..!!!!!!