Date: 08/25/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 32
great story cant wait to hear more
Date: 08/14/2006 - 01:03 am Title: Chapter 32
OK ... I just left a final review somewhere else ... anyhow ... I love your work and will continue to read what you create. You do such a great job with Spike and with Buffy. AND you certainly create some wonderful new characters!!! Great imagination and talent!! I hope that you continue this adventure in the USA ... it would be great. Thank you for your story.
Date: 08/11/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 32
Men like Ralph are dangerous. ... Good that Hilda was there to prevent something bad. Oh my, was Hilda killed now because the spell was broken after she fell to the ground? I hope not. Maybe you could explain it in an epilogue, them calling home for her? ~ I can say it was fun reading too :) BTW the story isn't marked "finish". Some people don't read WIPs.
Date: 08/10/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 32
No epilogue about arriving home? No update on Hilda? That's a bit abrupt....