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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 08:53 am Title: A Call to Arms

Good start to the story, but it could use a good beta. Several grammar errors, and the writing could use a little bit of polish. But I'm really intrigued so far, so really good start. =)

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