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Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 04:11 am Title: A version of the past
Date: 08/06/2015 - 04:11 am Title: A version of the past
I love this story - Glad to be reading it once again.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 09:16 am Title: A version of the past
Date: 01/15/2014 - 09:16 am Title: A version of the past
Good chapter, though a bit rushed. Again, just needs a bit of polish. Dialogue is good, I'm loving Dawn & Xander here. Buffy sounds too British here and in the previous chapter, and still some grammar/spelling errors.
Reviewer: spike4buffy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 11:45 am Title: A version of the past
Date: 08/03/2006 - 11:45 am Title: A version of the past
OHHHHHH..*wipes tears* Thats the sweatest thing Xanders ever said in any story ive read.. THANKU.. I bow down to u