I think this chapter moved the story along quite well! You're building the excitement/nervousness for the upcoming battle and you provided us with a really good understanding of the slayers feelings regarding Buffy, Spike and the rest of the "Sunnydale gang". I think you did a great job and I can't wait to read what happens next! More soon please!

I thought this chapter did just what you needed it to do...setting the scene for the battle to come. This chapter had some parts that I really liked & others that I really loved too. I liked the scene with Dawn reassuring Spike then Willow & Xander thanking Spike. I loved this...“Starting without me pet?” His voice was honey and fine wine, suggestive and assured as he swaggered across the room towards the stage."...helloooo Spike... and this..."Buffy Summers was legend, William the Bloody was myth." Buffy's dream about baking cookies & Spike made me laugh. I liked Buffy being a strong woman by making the right decision in her personal life & being the slayer by putting aside her personal life to win. Hmmm...I think the story is moving right along. I am definitely still feeling the love...point in fact...I would love another chapter.