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Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2004 - 05:43 pm Title: A welcoming committee

Another great chappie as usual! I like the Xander/Spike interaction. It's nice to see them being civil to each other rather than hating each other. As usual......more please! :) P.S. Congrats on the great deals! That sounds too good to be true!

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2004 - 08:03 pm Title: A scene replayed

Well, I suppose it's better to get everything out in the open and starting level than ignoring things/pretending everything's peachy. I think you're doing a great job & I love how you're handling everything. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2004 - 12:26 pm Title: A scene replayed

Do you see this face? It's the resolve face, you fix this now! Great chapter, btw. Lots of twists and turns. I bet we haven't seen the last of Richard.

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2004 - 10:50 am Title: A scene replayed

I'm not talking to you anymore ... Its got to be illegal what you are doing to us Great job on the chappy yet again. Please excuse me while I go chase that bone your danglin' I'm bound to catch it eventually. Ta

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2004 - 08:04 am Title: A scene replayed

Good thing I did not get all comfortable with my satisfaction in that last chapter, huh? I said it before...you are not afraid to take me or your story right to the edge. Yeah...I pretty much knew that Spike not having a memory of everything back in Sunnydale would be a big problem. I have noticed that he seems to be getting most of the really bad bits back too. He has none of their last moments together to balance out some good with all the bad. I never connected the Dawn thing with the Buffy thing. You dropped the bomb on me when Spike confessed. I did not realize that you had me that close to the edge. Sneaky. Wow...add that to the mix with the possiblity of Spike having to bite Dawn plus a small window of time to fight the big brewing evil. Yikes! Things are getting tense. I am glad that you stuck with your muse...I like an edge to my stories. Many thanks for & a grateful goodbye to Richard. Smart Buffy. I guess Buffy won't be..."sleeping with that sexy vampire" or "going to have sex with Spike again" or "let him make love to her like he always wanted, let him hold her afterwards while she slept"...any time soon, huh? Tease. Guess there will be fallout in the next chapter that I am so eagerly waiting for too, huh? Evil.

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2004 - 08:35 pm Title: A few things resolved

This was a very satistifying chapter. Finally Dawn put an end to Buffy's overactive imagination about Dawn's "romance" with Spike. Plus Dawn gave Buffy the Spike nudge that she needed. A whole hearted thank you goes to Dawn. Then...ta da...we get smoochies & sexy Spike & Buffy flirtation. We get a Spike that is not so much a mystery. It all felt so good...maybe too good. I am still nervous because Buffy & Spike did not really "talk", Spike is volitile because he doesn't have his full set of memories only echos, Buffy doesn't know what to do about Richard besides forget & ignore that he exist, & there is evil afoot. No, I do not see where the dance floor has been cleared at all but they may finally be hearing the same band. Let the music play...

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2004 - 08:00 pm Title: A little bit of history repeating

You make me laugh. Oh no...you are definitely not writing this story just for me. I read on an LJ a couple of days ago where someone was trying to track your story down when The Spuffy Realm was down...so nope I believe you have lots of readers...they just aren't as talky as me. It took me a while to really start giving feedback...now I can't be quiet. I loved this chapter...I had to read it twice...your lines like this... "There was no affection in it, just anger and confusion, lust and fear he kissed her as if he could break her growing hold on him by the ferocity of his kiss alone, he wanted to subdue her, to punish her spitfire soul for having the audacity to call to him."...revealed the build up of their passion & emotions so intensely. Buffy with the Dawn thing(snicker)...I notice her Richard never even crossed her mind. I really like Spike instinctively stopping before they went too far. Buffy & Spike are doing the dance of one step forward two steps back...I would not have it any other way. I believe I have another chapter to read....

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2004 - 07:10 pm Title: A few things resolved

Just started reading today. I really like. I normally like R or NC17 stories, but this is really sweet. Loved the dynamic between Buffy and Spike. Knowing that he is drawn to her, but fighting the impulses. I also like how we see him go through it. In the series, he just had a dream about it and suddenly he's having moon eyes over it. Hope he remembers holding her before the apolcolypsis and how it was in the last few weeks/days.

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2004 - 06:11 pm Title: A few things resolved

Awesome, awesome update! Can't wait for more! I love the pace you've set with Spike & Buffy's relationship. It's so believable! :)

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2004 - 04:28 pm Title: A few things resolved

Yeah, subtlely is not in my vocab, hence the liking of "throbbing manhood" but it worked anyway, hah! Okay so your getting closer on the lovin', but why do i feel that you have a bone a string and you're just teasing us, ready to yank it away again. Again great writing bringing joy to myself sordid existence. ok i'm going to check back in an hour for an update

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2004 - 01:57 pm Title: A little bit of history repeating

I finally got some action! But you gotta stop leavin me hangin like that! Seriously great job on the passion thing. Very Hot! But there is nothing wrong with "throbbing manhood" I like very much. I am sure i will reviewing the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2004 - 04:57 am Title: A step back

Oh so very glad to see a new chapter of your story. Uh oh...looks like Buffy's emotions are blazing so bright that she is burning the psyche of the crazy Dru-like sister of Marcus...that can't be good. Buffy seems like she is on emotional overload & about to blow. It is kinda funny. Her Dawn jealousy just makes me laugh but I get it. Spike's extremely contrasting treatment of Buffy & Dawn has to hurt. Plus Dawn is enjoying having so much of Spike's attention to the fullest. Spike is definitely conflicted about Buffy. He is just loving winding Buffy up. Terrific visual of the two of crashing through the kitchen out the door. I am pretty much thrilled that Spike & Buffy are having such an effect on each other. They are passionate whether they are fighting or loving. I love how you are handling the two of them. You have kept them exciting & unpredictable. Your whole story is like that which is one of the reason that I am so in to it. The next chapter should be explosive...can't wait.

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2004 - 07:18 pm Title: A realisation

Two chapters? Wow...you made my day. This chapter may have been short but it was big in other ways. Spike finally begining to sense just how deeply aware of Buffy he really is...he did not kill the kid because of her...he is deeply attracted to & dreaming of her...he wants answers about her. You have Spike put into words what he feels for Dawn & open up to her. You have things between Buffy & Spike start to come out. Spike & Buffy's "talk" outside was so good from Spike's...“Make me.” he challenged, his tongue stroking the back of his teeth" to his...“I don’t love you yet”. The encounter was made even more powerful by scared Buffy resorting to hitting him again...in her defense he wasn't talking so much as challenging her...and Buffy's vunerable...“You don’t love me anymore”. You have set the stage for some powerful emotions & tummy tingling UST...not to mention danger. I am all for it.

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2004 - 06:35 pm Title: A familiar dance

Loved the new chapter. First I think it is funny that Buffy is jealous of Dawn in that "way". It is obvious to me that Spike is treating Dawn as a little sis. It makes me feel for Buffy that Spike's rejection of her would screw up her perception so much yet it is so farfetched that it makes me laugh too. It is pretty obivious that Spike is attracted to Buffy despite himself...the flirting between them felt good. I like feeling that Spike could sense that there were some good Buffy memories...“Surprised I could forget a dance like that”...me too. Wow...that ending was...yikes...the next chapter should be good.

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2004 - 04:03 pm Title: A realisation

Smoochies for you for the extra chappy! But you're still killing me! You're a BAD GIRL for the torcher you're putting us through! Hope you have a "Spike-filled" weekend!

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2004 - 03:41 pm Title: A realisation

Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow! It's all beginning to come together! Thanks for the extra chappie today (wonderful stuff!), but of course, I ALWAYS want more!!! Hope you have a great long weekend! :)

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2004 - 02:08 pm Title: A familiar dance

I love when Spike & Buffy fight together....pure magic, and you wrote that scene so well!! I'm glad that Spike is finally beginning to see Buffy, I know what an incredible feat that must be for him at this point. I mean, just a few days ago he thought she killed both him & Drusilla in a fire! Yay Spike! I'm also feeling a twinge of anxiety over Buffy's belief that Spike & her sister are "together". Ack! I sense some spuffiness on the horizon, though. Perhaps they'll both be seeing the light soon.... :) More please! I'm enjoying this story so very much!

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2004 - 12:39 pm Title: A familiar dance

Ok, so i guess i'll pretned to understanding and say that work is more important than spuffy luvin' (HA!) Anyway another great chappy, but you are just really mean for teasing us with no action yet!

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2004 - 09:51 pm Title: A bit of progress

The feeling is mutual...each new chapter makes me love your story more & more. The story just keeps getting better & better...& it started off pretty damn good. You drew me in with that almost kiss between Spike & Buffy. You played it just perfectly...I felt Spike's rejection of Buffy as if it were my own. This is a bit of poetic justice for Buffy because of their past. I am just glad that she is aware of it..."his talented hands drawing patterns on her bare skin, she had been his canvas back then and his muse. She ached with regret as the memory played out "...must mention what beautiful lines are in this scene...I ache with her. Things seem so hard for her now...this rejection from Spike thing, the turning out to may not be as nice as she thought Richard thing, the baby eating incestuous evil big bad thing, & the can't help it jealously of Dawn thing. You are just breaking heart but good...I love it. The sweetly simple scene with Xander was much needed after all of the conflicting emotions between Buffy & Spike. Do I need to tell you how eager I am for the next chapter? Oh...I am...I am...

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2004 - 05:15 pm Title: A bit of progress

You're totally right, Buffy does deserve what's she's getting to a certain extent. I just can't help feeling sorry for people when they're down! Anyway, I just love this story and I can't wait to read your next offering. I'm sure it willl be fantasticl!

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2004 - 11:28 am Title: A bit of progress

Aargh! Write faster. I have always been a souless Spike fan. Bad boys are more fun! But soulful Spike is good too (Who am I kidding? Anyway I can get Spike I will take it!) Anyway I am loving the story, and can't wait for some Spuffy Luvin'!

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2004 - 05:26 pm Title: A coming awake

Yikes! Your evil doers eat babies. Babies!It is good to see Willow talking about Tara & magic. You are ripping my heart out with Spike reacting so harshly to Buffy while being so loving to Dawn...not complaining cause I love & hate it at the same time. Buffy feeling like Spike does not want her...Buffy finally realizing the emptiness of her life..."All she had left were memories of an old life he didn’t remember and thoughts of a new life she’d never wanted."...powerful line...heart wrenching...I feel deeply for her. You have me just itching for the next chapter.

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2004 - 02:24 pm Title: A coming awake

Really great chapter! I feel so sorry for Buffy. It must be terrible not being able to totally open up about everything. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sluggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2004 - 01:09 pm Title: A coming awake

Wonderful story. I am really enjoying it. Looking forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: nip1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2004 - 02:15 am Title: A silent attack

Read all 13 chapters at one sitting. Very well written and believeable. I can't wait to read more!

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