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Reviewer: icafreak Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 02:45 am Title: Ties That Bind

This isn't so much a review as a friendly FYI. Your personal site lists a chapter (Revelations) in between 'Regrets' and 'Ties that Bind' that seems to be missing from this site. I did a little digging when I got really confused by the beginning of this chapter. It was more than a little confusing for Andrew do go from threatening Nighna for info to all of a sudden being at Lorne's apartment, and William to be on patrol when we last saw him driving the gang to the hospital. I'm surprised no one seems to have mentioned this to you before now.

Apart from that little hiccup I am really, really enjoying this fic and also greatly enjoyed it's predecessor. The moral dilemmas you have put our beloved characters through are amazing. I've been reading fic since season 5 was on the air and I can honestly say that this fic/series is one of the best I have ever read. You are a truly talented storyteller.

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