Really glad Riley left! Now what happened to Joyce??? Great chapter!

This is really not working. First of all, the story is almost exactly the series. There is not one new idea, except that they're a band instead of demon-hunters. Why would I want to re-read the entire season 4 (Not even a very good season)? Secondly, none of the characters are likeable, which I kind of don't understand because they are exactly the characters from the show. (I really didn't like a lot of Season 4 though, so maybe you've just managed to tap into all of what I hated about Season 4.
I think you would be better off abandoning this story and trying somehting else. You're right, Buffy and Spike are great characters, you could do something else with them.

Author's Response: I disagree - there are differences. And not just that Spike and Buffy aren't trying to kill each other. The whole point to this story was a funny parallel to the series that I thought up. Story's already finished, so I won't be abandoning it. But, thanks for the review.