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Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 12:37 am Title: Interlude 18/19 - Girl Talk

great chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 09:46 pm Title: Interlude 18/19 - Girl Talk

*sigh* not only William is unhappy, Buffy is it too. As is the rest of his family. I wish he would be back already.

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Date: 08/24/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter 18 - Change of Pace

great chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Change of Pace

They seem to treat William better.. but whatever: he is still a prisoner! Sorry.. but I'm glad that Roger Wyndam-Pryce killed himself. He was a monster, not William. I'm glad that William is strong.. so he can, even as a human, keep it up with a slayer. He and Buffy will be matched even (balanced). And as nice Nate may seem he is not. They still want to use William as a weapon. And look what they did to Willow! And to Giles. I'm glad that William did hear every word. And that Wesley was there.. maybe he can reach Buffy and tell.

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Change of Pace

LOVING THIS STORY HERE AND ON YOUR WEB SITE! HOPE YOU'LL POST MORE BECAUSE THIS IS A GREAT STORY THAT REALLY DRAWS YOU IN

Reviewer: Emilee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Change of Pace

A gilded cage is still a cage. You made that point very nicely. One would have thought with Giles in charge of the Council, they would have moderated their ideas and methods, but you're making a good case for power corrupts as well. I truly hope that their plan with William backfires in an extremely bloody and viscious way and that all the perpetrators come to a very slow painful justice. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: spikethralled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter 18 - Change of Pace

that was a cracker of a chapter. cant wait for the next one.hope you keep up the momentum. like to know whats going on with angel and crew surely they would be moving heaven and earth to try and get him back. keep up the writing this is my favorite story at the moment.

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 18 - Change of Pace

I'm enjoying your story, but..... I miss Buffy .....and the others back 'home'. Will we ever 'see' them again? Are you sure this is a Spuffy story, she never writes, she never calls, she rarely visits? Doesn't she love us anymore?
Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: inthralltospike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Interlude 17/18B - Missing Links

come on you cant leave it like that whats angel doing while all this is going on? why has'nt Gunn used the law to get him back? and where is Giles? how long till the calvery arrive please sit and let the muse take you and give us more more more!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Interlude 17/18B - Missing Links

Seems that nobody, nobody! told Dawn that William is missing.. or maybe Connor wrote it in one of his (unread) emails. Ah-ha! I just don't see why I should be happy Spike's back again, while Anya's gone. That's the reason Xander is so awful bitter here.
But thanks for Xander that Dawn contacts Connor now (or wants to). Who was that at the end of the chapter? Illyria has no body. ~ We haven't heart of Dru lately... because Dawn was chilled.

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 04:13 pm Title: Interlude 17/18B - Missing Links

this story just keeps getting better and better, and with very good plot twists . thanks for the update

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: Interlude 17/18B - Missing Links

great chapter

Reviewer: Emilee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 03:11 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Interesting developments. God, the ignorance and arrogance of Roger Wyndham-Pryce (Thing One hehe) is absolutely astounding. I'm getting the feeling that God him/herself could stand in front of him pronouncing judgement and he wouldn'f accept it. And Thing Two's main failing is cowardice pure and simple, but hopefujlly this wake up call will help him along. I am now happily anticipating much smiting of the antagonists. I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Yash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2006 - 06:27 am Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Oh my gosh! Your story is so great. I love it. Spike/William made human to be raised by Angel. What a great twist. Buffy and Wesley are the guardians of Illrya? Very interesting. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

I've just spent a most enjoyable morning reading this story. Excellent characterizations all the way around, and a truly endearing and engaging portrayal of William/Spike. My heart aches for him, and for poor trapped Buffy. Wonderful!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 12:16 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

It start as the last chapter ended (my comment): Poor William. *sigh* How he is treated. And now with the drugs they brought the demon out. Seems indeed that it is a child too. But what it the scary blue light? Or better who? Illyria.. and after her Wesley was aloud to speak. The demon is as as innocent as any human on the day of their birth? That's indeed most significant, to use your words. I wonder if Wesley's warnings (and Illyria's) fell to ears that hear. Rather the contrary I assume.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Man I was starting to get upset. I can't stand seeing my little Will get upset and abused!!! But I absolutely love this story, and I have total faith in you!

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

Absolutely awesome

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

great chapter

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery

THANKS FOR THE QUICK UPDATE. COULD THE POWERS OR ILLYRIA SEND SOMEONE TO KICK ROGER DOWN THE STAIRS 2 OR 3 TIMES? AND WHERE'S BUFFY? GREAT STORY, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE

Reviewer: Emilee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

I have a love/hate relationship with this story. It's incredibly well written and has a unique and engaging plot. But, I loathe how William is treated in this. It makes me want to jump into the story and beat the crap out of the ignorant Watcher's Council. Would I be correct in assuming that it's going to get worse before it gets better? Please tell me it's going to have a happy ending. I can take the gut-wrenching angst if the ending will be happy. Well, happy after the Wrath of God falls on the Council of course. Excellent chapter as far as pulling me further into the story and great job making poor William so easy to care about. As a mother, though, the content just ticks me off. I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

Oh he, William, has to get up awful early. That's awful what they do to him. Look what they did to Pete. Chalmers? I don't trust him much. And what did they do with William after he looked in the crystal (got hypnotized)? ~ Poor one indeed. How he gets treated and it doesn't stop. ~ Till next chapter

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

great chapter

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

I am so torn with this story. Part of me wants him saved NOW, and the other part knows there are things that have to happen. I for one enjoy this story, and look forward to seeing it updated.

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

thanks for the update, but i'm still shaking in anger for poor little will and what the monsters that have him. ore doing to him. what will buffy be able to do to rescue him? please update soon. your writing is so absorbing, i feel like i'm inside the story.

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