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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter 15 -The Unfriendly Skies

Poor Will ~ they put him into a cage? And drugged him.. good he heard at last a little bit of the conversation. Poor lad...

Author's Response: *nods* They were really mean to him, treating him like that. Horrid people, truly.

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 15 -The Unfriendly Skies

hoo poor will! love the story!

Author's Response: He's not having an easy time of things, the poor child.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter 15 -The Unfriendly Skies

omg!!!! this chapter was soooo sad. i really wish you would get more reviews for this story. it really is a good one. great job. post soon. wonder how buffy is talking thing. does she know??? great job.

Author's Response: Thanks, blondiebear. I agree with you. Tell all your friends and hold the gun until they comment. *grins*

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 15 -The Unfriendly Skies

Excellent story, well defined characters and unexpected happenings. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, Toni. We wanted this to be more than surface writing.

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Torn Asunder

no!!!! pleas get him back home soon!!! come on u cant do that to poor will!

Author's Response: We're not doing it to the sweet boy - it's all RWP and Nathaniel. Honest!

Reviewer: aerialla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter 14 - Torn Asunder

Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: Thank you, hon. More to follow.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Torn Asunder

oh this story just gets better, but don't forget Buffy. Is he going to grow up in England & return when he is 18??so many different ways to take this tale-go you!

Author's Response: I promise Buffy won't be forgotten, but she'll be more prominent in the latter chapters of the fic.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Torn Asunder

*sigh* Good chapter.. but this was when it all went bad. William was taken from his family.. and Buffy. *sigh* I would say make it better but that's not gonna happen so soon, right?

Author's Response: *nods* Certainly not as soon as Will would like, poor boy.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Torn Asunder

HOLY CRAP!!!! I've never wanted to jump into my computer and beat someone down as much as I do right now!!!! I love this story I really do, as a matter of fact, it's one of my all time favorites ( and I've been doing this for a long time) but right now, I don't know what to do. I know in the end it's all gonna work out alright, but right now, I'm freaking out!!!!!!

Author's Response: Aw, Angie! You make us proud. Things seem pretty dire at the moment, don't they? Be cool, hon. There's worse to come. (Oooops, did I say that out loud?)

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 13 - Something Wicked This Way Comes

ho no dont take will away!!!!

Author's Response: So sorry. They wouldn't stop when we shouted down the halls. Mean people.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2006 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Something Wicked This Way Comes

So William is curious how his mother looks like as a wolf.. and he got his first kiss. Scary.. Nina got out of her cage. But she recognized William as her child (through the blood I guess). She would never hurt him. But even worse: School will alert Social Service. That's really bad. ~ Good chapter though!

Author's Response: We figged Nina had become more used to her wolfy self than she was at the beginning, and the maternal instinct is a strong force.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Something Wicked This Way Comes

oh, this chapter was too precious. loved it. please PLEASE post soon. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks, hon. More coming soon.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2006 - 02:02 am Title: Interlude 12/13B - Boys Night Out

I love this story. I feel so sorry for Connor, I always felt there could have been so much more to that story. I enjoy how often you update, I know with RL that can be a challenge. This is really one of my favorites,

Author's Response: We like having Connor as part of Beloved. He'll have a larger part in the latter chapters. IF this goes according to our outline.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: Interlude 12/13B - Boys Night Out

loved it. i really love this story. i can't wait to read how william is gonna be when he gets about 16 or 17 years old. this is so good. please PLEASE post soon. amazing job. little william is so cute. lol

Author's Response: *grins* are we anticipating a little rebellion from our hellion? Anything is possible.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2006 - 06:51 pm Title: Interlude 12/13B - Boys Night Out

I wonder what kind of surprise William has for Connor (maybe something from Dawn? Awe, it was. William did correspondent with Dawn. Thanks to Angel's lie it went all down two years before *sigh* Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Decisions have consequences, and Angel has to learn the high price other people pay for his choices.

Reviewer: aerialla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2006 - 03:14 pm Title: Interlude 12/13B - Boys Night Out

I am loving this story so much. It has definitely become one of my favorites. I love how you have added the interludes as they really let you become a part of the story.

Keep up the good work and the quick updates.

Author's Response: There's so much story to tell for so many people, the interludes are the only way to let everyone shine. Glad you're enjoying.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Interlude 12/13 - Sins of the Father

Yeah, Gunn is right: The first lie did bite Angel in his a**. (Loved the name of the kids). And Gunn did never sent these letters; I think he won't call Angel either.

Author's Response: A big old chomp with fangs. Silly vamp never did get that he can't control everything.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

This chapter made me want to cry, I went back and re-read it twice. I felt so sorry for Conner and Dawn. I felt sorry for everybody. I think this is a great story.

Author's Response: Meant in the nicest way... I'm glad I made you cry. Lying is never the best answer... especially when it comes to Angel and making unilateral decisions.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

that is so wrong!!! i would have rathered giles and willow not find a way for buffy to come back at all than to have her come back and go all marble-y again. *sighs* please make this write. loved it. post soon. great job.

Author's Response: Willow and Giles did manage to free poor Buffy. I wonder who it was to remarbelize her? Liliaeth and I are really trying to make this all come out right. Just seems to be taking a long, long time. Wish us luck?

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

This is such an awesome story I even emailed my Irish penfriend to get her to read it. I'm guessing Buffy won't become herself until William is old enough to be with her-in the Biblical sense of course

Author's Response: You make it a small world after all. Thanks for spreading the fic around the world, hon. I'd say your guess is a fair bet. *grins*

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

Buffy was gone? I wonder what she did... does she sleep? It sounds bad that she feels weak. Oh OH! Did it work? Seems as if Buffy is back.. "And their birth cries will rent the air as the grounds themselves do tremble to give up their lost soul â?? as it tears its bonds asunder." Then maybe this is Buffy's (re-)birth. But what about the next part Wesley was reading? How sad.. Buffy is back being a statue. I wonder what Illyria has to do with everything. If it would be so 'easy' to resurrect her (Illyria).. I wonder what she (Illyria) will do if she comes back. Poor Buffy, poor William. How sad for them. And even Dawn is leaving now.

Author's Response: It's a real mess for them all, isn't it? I do hope that over the course of the story that all the questions are answered, at least well enough to make some sense. Glad you're still enjoying, love.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 12:43 am Title: Interlude 11/12 - A Hundred Bottles of Beer on the Wall

xander is one crazy bunny!!! hopefully, he gets his stuff together. i wouldn't wan him trying to hurt william. his slayer charge was right. xander should rejoice in the living. he's so messed up though. anyway, great job. pleaes post soon. when is buffy coming back? can't wait for more. great job.

Author's Response: No worries, blondiebear. Buffy'll have moreto say in the fic. We promise. As for Xander getting it together? We'll just have to follow along and see what happens.

Reviewer: spikethralled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 04:17 pm Title: Interlude 11/12 - A Hundred Bottles of Beer on the Wall

much too short not really interested in Xander poophead.

Author's Response: Awww... poor thing has had such a hard time of it. No worries, more to come.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 03:34 pm Title: Interlude 11/12 - A Hundred Bottles of Beer on the Wall

Yeah Xander is not happy that Spike did come back and Anya not. Hart for him to bear. But he stopped himself before it could get too worse. ~ Till next chapter!

Author's Response: *nods* Xander's not exactly little Gary sunshine, is he? Next chapter coming up soon.

Reviewer: Angie K. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 11 - Family Matters

Hahaha, poor little kitties. >:) I just read this whole story tonight, and I love it. Little Will is SO cute!!!! Love that you put Dawn and Connor together, and though I never really liked Nina in the show, I am loving her in your story. Also, I love the banner, and was wondering what sources you got all the awesome photos from?

Author's Response: I'm in love with the banner, too. The wonderfully talented sueworld2003 from Live Journal made it for us. So glad you're enjoying the fic, too. *smiles*

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