Date: 07/15/2012 - 04:13 am Title: Epi
Awesome story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.
Dani
Date: 10/10/2009 - 09:32 pm Title: Epi
I'm sorry, but you really can't write! Your ideas were good but there are too many typos and other grammar mistakes; even I (English is not my language) noticed. You should have used a beta reader.
Date: 02/03/2007 - 02:52 am Title: Epi
I love the basic idea and plot for this story, but it was horribly written. I’m not trying to be mean, just tell you the truth. Problems: Number one- you pulled the characters too far out of character (that’s just my opinion, not something that is really wrong with your story). Number two- you skip whole scenes then talk about them as if you had written, it is confusing as HELL. Number three- you skip words and mix up words ALL THE TIME. Number four- you misspell A LOT.
As I said before I’m not trying to be mean, I think you could be a great writer; you just need someone to read over your work before you post.
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Date: 12/17/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Epi
Loved this fic! Will be looking forward to the sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 12/16/2006 - 11:23 pm Title: Epi
Oh a time jump. Love when a story ends this way. ~ So there is a prophecy about Buffy becoming pregnant? I'll try to look out for a sequel. :)
Author's Response: Never even relised til it was complete that I left room for a sequel. Most likely a short one.