Date: 10/30/2007 - 07:16 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Damn but Willow was spot on in her argument. Great points she made. WOW, hot dance image. Buffy is one lucky girl.
Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy doesn't even know how lucky she really is. *le sigh*
Date: 06/16/2007 - 01:15 am Title: Coming Clean II
I am enjoying this fic, smut or no smut, I thought this chapter was great.
Author's Response: Why thank you!! I'm glad you've enjoyed it...and there's plenty of smut interwoven here.
Date: 11/28/2006 - 06:15 pm Title: Coming Clean II
This story is so cute. But xander is such a jerk in this one. .You should do..something bad. to him....
Author's Response: I'm thinking very long and very hard about it. Any suggestions?
Date: 11/14/2006 - 11:42 pm Title: Coming Clean II
no, I didn't think Xander gave up too easily...in fact, I'd be happy if he gave up entirely...ah well, the trio will survive whatever he throws at them, right? very hot chapter!
Author's Response: When all else fails, have faith in the Spillfy. thanks for the reviews!
Date: 07/31/2006 - 08:50 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Fabulous chapter! I'm glad you're going to give this fic some plot instead of just making it a PWP. :D Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you kindly!
Date: 07/31/2006 - 12:53 am Title: Coming Clean II
Great chapter! Loved how Willow gave it to Xander!
Author's Response: Willow anger is a scary thing.
Date: 07/29/2006 - 12:24 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Awe, loved Spike and William defending Buffy! (*cough* I checked kips but got no meaning.. lips? *end cough*) I see.. if Xander likes two girls (or Tara and Willow together), this is okay. But not Buffy and the twins. He's indeed a hypocrite. Awe, Buffy can be really lucky to have them :) Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
And to your A/N: Look here: Betas
There are some LJ communities for people who want a Beta and or sites where to look if you don't find one. Good luck! You don't have a Livejournal? You don't need it for asking a question there but I'm curious.
Author's Response: What, you mean you've never kipped someone?! Shocking. (Just kidding, I corected that, thanks.) And I've tried those resources, but none of the 5 betas I've tried have returned anything I sent them...so I figured I might as well as from a pool of people who are interested in the fic already. And I do have a LJ, browse a few of the communities there too.
Date: 07/29/2006 - 11:11 am Title: Coming Clean II
Great story so far! Willow was AWESOME in this chapter!!! The characterization is wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/29/2006 - 08:22 am Title: Coming Clean II
Loved it! I am really, really (*blushes a bit*) enjoying this fic. I love how Willow defended them and showed Xander his double-standard. Great dance-floor stuff. I kind of got goose-bumps when Spike was thinking how he wanted to mark those two he loved publicly....Hmmm.
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you're enjoying it, enjoy away!!
Date: 07/29/2006 - 08:14 am Title: Coming Clean II
Though there was no real smut...the dancing was definatly very hot..
Willow touched on a good point here! Guys have fantasies all the time about being with twins..But when it's a woman with two guys...well..everyone gets all up in arms about it. BTW..I loved what Willow said to Xander! She is awsome in this fic ; )
Author's Response: Ha, thanks, Willow is rockin' out in this. And it's true, double standards do still exist...but that's why we have fan fiction :D
Date: 07/29/2006 - 03:50 am Title: Coming Clean II
Whoaa... Buffy has it good. It's us poor readers that need sympathy! *LOL*
Author's Response: Ha, yeah, we could all do with some good Will/Spike lovin'. Can't we just...clone JM? A lot?
Date: 07/29/2006 - 02:35 am Title: Coming Clean II
great chapter
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 07/29/2006 - 01:29 am Title: Coming Clean II
loved it!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 07/29/2006 - 12:01 am Title: Coming Clean II
Well, maybe not the smut you promised, but hey... prelude to smut is good too, gotta admit, Will Buffy and Spike dirty dancing together is pretty much creeping up the hot scale! And Xander and his narrow mind, no, of course he's not done, he's like that pebble in you shoe, you thing you've gotten rid of it, but you take a step and back, just in another spot this time! So the trio is heading home to ensure some smutacular threesome lovin' for your next chap eh? I'll be looking forward to it. Thanks! Exceptional tale!
Author's Response: Yeppers, Xander is the bad penny here. Maybe someone will lay him on a railroad track or something...
Date: 07/28/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Glad to see the update even if it didn't include the promised smut. And I figured we hadn't seen the last of Xander - unfortunately. Hopefully, everyone will just kick his ass and be done with him.
Author's Response: I'm kind of a slave to the story; but Xander will get his due. Don't know how yet, as this story is writing itself as I go along, but it will happen, even if I have to sit the threesome down and give them a strong talking-to.
Date: 07/28/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Haha...what a tease! I can't what to see the smutacular threesome! I thought Xander gave up too easily! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Yeha, well, good things come to those that wait and all that rot.
Date: 07/28/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Coming Clean II
ok, i forgive you for lying...but this chapter was still good! go willow!!
Author's Response: ha, thanks. Dodged a bullet there. And yeah, Willow pulled through.
Date: 07/28/2006 - 07:36 pm Title: Coming Clean II
I am loving this story so much. it is so good. can't wait to see whats going to happen next.
Author's Response: Well thank you! :)
Date: 07/28/2006 - 07:19 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Even without the smut I loved it. More please
Author's Response: Thanks!