I was unsure about this story, until one of the kings suggested I read it, I thought they stayed children, so now I have time to read it.

I feel so sad for William, I even started to cry a couple times because of what he went through.


That class is a bunch of monster, and they have babies too. Only 2 teachers that is a bit much, and might not even be legal. But then again up here all the kids would already be in the second year of school. I thought they were only about 2 or 3 until they said William was 5.

This is so adorable! Exactly what I needed after a long, harsh day :) Besides, it's about time I started to read this one!

I love the brutal honesty you can exibit with kiddie characters. I laughed my socks of at Angel's “I hate Riley, he smells!”- it was so obviously what Angel has always wanted to say! Loved it!

And little buffy and spike are unbelievably cute! I'm sure I'll adore this one!! xxx

Looby - seriously, you were in the wrong in your response to Mlle in chapter 11, and she did not deserve the pure hatred you showered upon her in your response then. You started this kerfuffle, and now she's thoroughly pissed off with you. If you had simply responded originally with something like, 'Really? You're getting that I am against working mothers from this fic? That was not intended at all. I myself....etc. It's just that in this fic the characters are a particular way, or have a particular mindset, etc, it's not my own personal viewpoint, etc' then you'd have a real response to a real reader's concern. Instead you called her terrible names for even raising the subject. You are reading far too much into what she originally wrote, and you missed a good opportunity to explain your point of view in the fic to her. None of this need have happened if you'd simply responded to what she actually said without projecting yourself into it. From a bystander-reviewer's point of view, this was pretty glaring. Plus, you pointed it out in the tagboard so that even people who weren't reading the reviews would come and see what you told her. If you really are the age you say you are then really it does not become you to behave in such a
manner.

Author's Response: Terrible names? - I called her a moron, and that goes for you too - it's a STORY for goodness sake - i write to relax, although i seem to be getting precious little relaxation out of it at the moment

I think your story idea is cute, but where is yoiur punctuation? You seem to aoid using periods and apostophes for the most part. It's weird. Just a thought. :-)

Fantastic start! I look forward to reading more. :D

i like this...they're totally cute..

This was cute, I like that :) But William can write even if he is only five? I learned it in school when I was six years. I would love to read on! This is good :)