Date: 10/27/2007 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
some how I don't think he will mind/
Date: 08/12/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm really enjoying this story. It gets a little distracting sometimes though, when you use so many non-American expressions (when not spoken by William) or describe school or college according to non-American practices (e.g. going to High School at 11, taking university-specific examinations, etc.) , that I'm often taken aback when I am reminded that they live in California. I am really liking this story and I know this is not an essential part of it. Just wanted to mention it and I hope you are not offended by it.
Date: 08/19/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
they are so lucky that they met benny...loved the chapter...
Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 16
William and Buffy sure were lucky to meet someone as kind and helpful as Benny. I enjoyed the glimpse into William's head, looks like we finally know William's feelings for Buffy are more than just brotherly. I can't wait to see where things go from here. Wonderful chapter!
Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter 16
I thought, i'll just make myself a sandwich and read the chapter.....i've just had to send out for take-away - and i KNOW i'll get a headache from the MSG, but i just HAD to have a Chinese!!! Hmmmmmmmmm dim sum!!
Date: 08/19/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 16
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
Tell the truth: Did you get hungry writing this chapter and the last? *grins* The menu did sound good *gg* And William even met another student. ~ Wow rain and thunder.. a lot of it and now they are out of power. ~ So both did some thinking about the other yet thinking it will be against the law. Well exactly " is my sister / brother " .. but only in the eyes of the law, not blood related. (That should them be able to marry, or?) Awe, they were very lucky! Buffy got a job and the found a place to live. ~ Loved the chapter :) And Buffy hasn't checked why William is feeling so awkward yet. *g*
Date: 08/18/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
Loved the chapter! Please update soon!
Date: 08/18/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
I could just go a Chinese take-away now - i'm starving! Great news about the job and place to live - more please!!!