Date: 10/27/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: chapter 17
Loved the Buffy sitting on William, and glad they don't want anyone else right now.
Date: 09/15/2006 - 01:43 am Title: chapter 17
please update soon. I am really getting into this story.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 07:03 pm Title: chapter 17
Good to see Chad and Marco are clever, trying to find a way out of the gang. ~ Mmmh-hmmm Buffy wants her new friends to believe that she and William are a couple, not brother and sister (well step-siblings, not blood related) because she don't want to get into a relationship. Interesting. :)
How bad for Cordelia that she trusts Angel. She'll be disappointed. He isn't trustworthy. Too bad she didn't see him read her diary. Yeah, she'll regret ever getting together with him.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: chapter 17
Cordelia will find herself in a lot of trouble hanging out with Angel! Great chapter!
Date: 08/24/2006 - 03:01 pm Title: chapter 17
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE
Date: 08/24/2006 - 08:43 am Title: chapter 17
You're doing a great job of fleshing out Angel's character, he really is a jerk and nothing but trouble. Learning more about him makes me worried about what's gonna happen when Buffy returns home. Good update.
Date: 08/24/2006 - 05:34 am Title: chapter 17
This is good but do you have to spend over half of the chapter on Angel and Cordelia. Really a lot of that stuff can be skipped. What you want to go into detail on is the Spike and Buffy parts. Please please please consider your audience.
Author's Response: Without giving the plot away, i need you to see how Angel and Cordelia's relationship is, to how he reacts to when Buffy gets back from New England. If I'd have left it at he just considers her a 'bang' or a quick shag, then it wouldn't make sense to the plot, so please have patience.
Author's Response: I hope you stick with it, you'll be rewarded!
Date: 08/23/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: chapter 17
Wow...Cordelia has become quite the actress! Update soon please!