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Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2006 - 01:48 pm Title: 11

very cute update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 11:17 pm Title: 10

I knew he'd get along with Joyce, but how she act toward him if she finds out what happened that first night? Spike is being really sweet and Buffy is really having a hard time hating him. Love the new chapter, more please.

Author's Response: Don't want to ruin what is to come, but Joyce will always "like" Spike. Buffy is having a hard time keeping him in the "big bad" box... she's struggling

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: 10

SR eat my review.. I want it back!
It was about how Buffy's words did sums her feeling up in the first part (very true), her fearing it and Spike liking at last Joyce from his "in-laws". *Sigh* It was better written the first time..

Author's Response: Bad SR for eating the review!!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: 10

cute chapter...

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 12:45 am Title: 9

good story so far

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 12:37 am Title: 9

nice update.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: 9

Excellent update. I love that Spike is being all sweet now and Buffy is seeing another side of him (too bad he had to color her thoughts of him with his forced possession previously). Well, I know eventually she'll come around. I agree with you on the The Count of Monte Cristos - an excellent book and several movies have been done as well, my fav having Richard Chamberlain as Edmund Dantes. Thanks for the reminder of such an excellent read and for sharing your wonderful tale as well.

Author's Response: NP, glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: 9

good chapter, spike reading to her is so sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 08:35 pm Title: 9

Mmm Spike trying to get points back... he is very caring with injured Buffy. Awe, he was even reading to her because Buffy wasn't tired. I wonder how things will go from now on; looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: He definitely realized he made a collasial mistake with his posession... hopefully Buffy will be able to look past it

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: 9

Count of Monte is indeed one of the best book ever written!!!!!!

Author's Response: It's wonderful, isn't it

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 11:09 pm Title: 8

yeah, safe from everyone except him. He's really trying to be nice, but I still don't think he gets just how forceful he was last night. I'm glad Buffy is still spunky though. I know it was forced, but she did like some of it - she's judging alot still on the actions of her father and others (even though Spike was really really wrong in taking Buffy last night - if he would of had a little patience, she would of come to him willingly eventually). Oh well, what's done is done, now he has to build some trust cause right now, she's got nothing to give him and he doesn't deserve it either. Great tale - heartbreaking at this time because both have so many issues (some I'm not even sure they are aware of yet). More please.

Author's Response: Buffy is stuck in the past with her father and formers... she needs to see past the illusion and see Spike; however he's tainted her view now... I'm sure Strong!Buffy will come out and she will perservier.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: 8

Spike panicked (well he has reason for it, right) and searched for Buffy. He has a long way to go to make it up. ~ Oh boy..that was certainly unexpected. Buffy got attacked? She didn't notice where she went. And Spike had his first opportunity to make it up to her; to comfort her. And now he is on a mission.. (mmmh love protective Spike).

Author's Response: Spike is very protective and very posessive.... hopefully he can redem himself

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 02:44 pm Title: 8

boy, buffy has been through hell these last 2 chapters. her unwavering goals and maintaining who she is shows what a strong character she is, even through all the drama. i can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: She certainly has been put to task the last two days... hopefully she will get better and continue to be strong

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 09:15 am Title: 7

Buffy was pissed off... I would have too. Spike is still a stranger to her and he took her belongings away, throw them away. ~ And even if Spike brought her pleasure? Buffy told him no and he didn't here. And too late he found out that he was still a virgin. He felt her shudder and knew he just lost any chance of gaining access to her heart. He sees that right.. but too late. (And I'm still glad I know the end of the story).

Author's Response: LOL, yes... the end of the story makes this dark stuff palatable... he definitely needs to change for the better

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: 7

Gonna do something I don't normally do and feel for Buffy on this one. William has really screwed up big time (fortunately - redemption is a big part of the Spuffy world and he's still got a chance - although I would imagine the road is going to be long and straight uphill!). I feel for Him too, cause he's obviously got some major issues if he things he's got to FORCE buffy to be with him. Well, give me some more cause leaving it here is pretty heart-breaking. And I hope Buffy isn't so broken that all her fires gone and if so, I hope he can bring it back eventually. Wonderful scene, probably hard to write, but very moving and emotional. I'm surprised William didn't realize sooner what he was doing and I'm also surprised that he's not now disgusted with himself and his actions. More please.

Author's Response: Yes, it was a very hard scene to write. Spike does have a long road and this wrong move has brought his life choices into focus. Glad that you enjoyed it, but are anxiously awaiting more (tomorrow)

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: 7

not to sure how i feel about this chapter. i know it serves a purpose though. so more soon please!

Author's Response: Glad you were brave and read it... it will get better, but they had to hit bottom first

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: 6

Uh-huh.. not only did Spike bring a new couch, he brought a lot more furniture with him. I don't think Buffy will be pleased. *nods* And after a long while, after some kissing, it seems Buffy noticed now *gg*. ~ I'll try to keep in touch with the story. Maybe I'll get late again.

Author's Response: Yeap

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: 5

That didn't go like Spike wanted.. Buffy know what her mother has suffered and she loved Hank; but Hank didn't love her that way back. And Buffy don't want a marriage without love.

Author's Response: Yeap

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: 4

Ah flowers.. and Buffy told him not see her again. But when he came Spike didn't look so good. No sleep, troubles? And now he is setting his plan in motion, huh? Yes..

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 08:13 pm Title: 3

Missed the updates :( First to chapter three:
Joyce was put in a long-term care facility? So Hank is free to cheat around. No wonder Buffy is so upset. I wonder how 'crazy' Joyce really it. ~ And Spike found Buffy through the gallery. *nods* So I remembered right (from the end of the story): Buffy herself is painting. And Spike convinced her on a date for now. And Dawn *sigh* So that's her secret.

Author's Response: Glad you are catching up

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 01:46 pm Title: 6

LOL at the "WILLIAM!" at the end, cause I can just picture Buffy's angry face as she no doubt screeched his name. Also laughting at his underhanded moving in technique, very nicely done! And the kissage? That was going so well until Buff took that trip down bad-memory lane. Oh well, I can't wait to read Spike talking his way outta this one, cause I know it's gonna be good. The only question is, how many times is Buffy going to punch him in the nose before she listens and accepts? Loving this muchly! More please.

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy this after next chapter... it is very dark and angsty. Spike will have a lot to pay for... I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter

Reviewer: alice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: 6

great chapter...what a place to leave off...update soon.

Author's Response: Glad that you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: 6

uhoh... spikes gonna get it now.

Author's Response: Spike's going to have to face something in the next chapter that defines their relationship for a long time

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 03:18 am Title: 5

I love it even more the second time around I swear. Such a forceful Spike. It's been such a long time since I've read this and since my hubby's taking a long bath, I thought why not???

Author's Response: LOL, you better jump him while he's around.... get all your orgasms for better writing

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 09:30 pm Title: 5

great chapter. l can see buffy doesn't want to go through what her mom did but it would be smart for her to tell spike her problems so he can tell her if he even has any intention of cheating on her. but then again whats to say she'd even belive him....can't wait to see what you do.

Author's Response: I don't think either character is thinking through... Buffy is trying to avoid the dreaded encounter and Spike is trying to push her into his heart

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