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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: This time last year [part one]

Loved the chapter! Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for another review- I'm glad you're still reading!! xx

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 06:07 pm Title: This time last year [part one]

So, we will have few answers, with these 2 chapters. Buffy's past, and what happened a year ago.

And it's a great idea to see this past directly, not with a Buffy's POV. Because in a way, we are not influenced.

So, it seems that Buffy was a year ago the perfect specimen of a little spoiled brat. Living the perfect life of a little spoiled brat. Spending Daddy's money, living in a world where only appearances matter. Not very bright, not very intelligent, but who cares? And perfectly happy with that.

But not totally happy. Because she is not totally blind. Not often, but sometimes "real life talks to her". She's aware that she doesn't know really her so-called friends. She feels something odd in this new student, Drusilla. Not often but sometimes she feels some guilt for her behavior, for example this time with Willow.

And these "not often but sometimes" has been already deeds, it seems. And like a sign that anywhere, Buffy is not only, could be more than a little spoiled brat. And I just love the way you depict this Buffy. A girl who doesn't seem so lovable, worth of having as a friend, but who is not so hateful.

Concerning Angel, since the beginning, he has looked like a perfect bastard. Well, he is rather THE perfect bastard. And it's not a surprise that with Dru he found the perfect match. He was apparently determined to be the one who will be Buffy Summer's first. And I have like an idea that the way he acts with Buffy, insulting her, calling her "slut", is only because he wasn't this first. If Faith is always ready to castrate as she said in the previous chapter, she can begin with this one...

The end of the chapter let us guess what happened to Buffy. And how did Harrison come in her life. I guess that when I'll read the next chapter, I will be sad, angry, furious etc... I want neverthless read it!

Author's Response: D'you know, I had written such a long and intelligent response to this review, and just when I was about to submit it- my NEW computer broke. I was so annoyed! Anyway, I can't remember what I said now (you'll just have to take my word on it being intelligent) But thank you very much, again, hunny :] You know how much I appreciate your lovely reviews :)

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: Wherever she may be

I thought in the previous chapter that Willow was a real knight in a shining armor. But I have not seen Faith ;)!

"No one stands my girl up and goes on thinking they can get away with it."

"If you get hurt, I’ll be back in a heartbeat and ready to castrate.”

God! The girl rocks :)!!! The way she talks to Spike :)! Truth hurts. "I am going to unleash some serious pain on you", it seems she has perfectly done it... Even if she leaves the town, I hope we'll see her again ;)!

I just love the moment where Spike marvels "at just how very much Buffy’s few friends cared for and protected her. First Willow, and now this woman". Yes, Buffy has now less friends than a year ago, but were Cordelia and co. real friends, or just "friends" with her? I don't think so. Willow, Xander, Faith and even Giles are.

So, we meet AT LAST the mysterious Harrison :)! Buffy's son. So much time for this moment ;)...

And now, after the answer to the big question, "who is Harrison?", new question: how did Buffy become mother?

I read the dancing metaphor, it's me who thanks you for using it :)! Yes, Spike is right, this entire dance is his own fault. It seems that Spike has (another ?) problem: 2 left foot. It reminds me this sentence "It needs to be two to dance the tango" ;)!

Perfect chapter, and I fly to the next ;)!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much again Klai- I'm glad you didn't mind me using your metaphor :) And I'm glad you loved Faith's part in the story- I always prefer to see her as one of the good guys- she's certainly one of my favourite characters :) Thank you again [sooooooo much!]

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: This time last year [part one]

love the idea of putting Buffy's back story in here. and wow did you make her an airhead... ;) this is much better than having Buffy explain everything to Spike, this way you show us what she went through more first hand. i like it!

and hello asshole Angel. so he thought of Buffy as a conquest from the beginning. i wouldn't have guested that . but it make sense seeing how easily he cheated on her with Dru.

of course we alreadt knew Dru was a major bitch, but this just shows that she never gave two shits about Buffy what so ever. she never was her friend.

now i want to know what is going to happen at the party. is this where she gets pregnant with Harry?? but i still don't think she was pregnant...i don't thinkt he time add up...but she could have been...

I WANNA KNOW!! :)

more please

Author's Response: Lol- thank you so much sweetheart :)

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 01:44 pm Title: This time last year [part one]

Great chapter ... it is as I imagined. (date rape drug... right) I just hope that somehow Spike is hearing all of this (is she kind of telling it in a strange way?) or that he finds out every detail ASAP!!!! sorry, I am way too impatient...

Author's Response: Lol, nothing to be sorry about! Don't worry- Spike will be told! :) Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 10:10 am Title: This time last year [part one]

A good description.. Buffy living in a bubble. Poor rich naive Buffy.. getting together with Angel, falling in love... and he is cheating on her. Even not going to that party, sleeping with Drusilla instead. And now Buffy is drugged. I fear I know what will happen / had happened in the past so she got pregnant.

Author's Response: The next chapter is now up, so you can go right on and find out hun. Thank you for reviewing again :)

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 04:10 am Title: This time last year [part one]

It's great to see the background, finally after so long, it would explain a lot. Though I couldn't help but shudder at Buffy's not-so-smart talks and oblivion to everything but herself. Then shudder some more at Angel and Dru. The final shudder came when the guy dropped drugs into Buffy's drink. *sigh*

That said, it's an amazing chapter, as always - and I look forward to the next one. :)

Author's Response: I know, I was aiming for a pretty shudder-worthy chapter. I'm really glad you enjoyed it luxferi :] The next chapter will be up soon, I promise xx

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 02:09 am Title: This time last year [part one]

wow... i think this story is amazing. just.. . it's so good. goddammit, i wanna claw out Angel's eyes. and ughasd;kfj. update sooooon!!

Author's Response: Lol- thank you. Well, the second part is already written but I think I'll drag it out a tiny bit more before I upadate again :D te he he!!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 01:57 am Title: This time last year [part one]

cant wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response: *hugs* you won't have to wait too long :)

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 12:06 am Title: This time last year [part one]

to say that Buffy is heading for a rude awakening is going to be an understatement. She is too innocent in the ways of the world, I think she only thinks her world can only be "perfect", and does not even see beyond her bubble. Can't wait for more and thanks

Author's Response: Thank you Debbie, I'm glad you're following the story so well :] And the next chapter will be up very soon, promise

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: This time last year [part one]

eagerly awaiting th enext installment, great buildup in teh first half

Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed margaret xx

Reviewer: Saya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: Wherever she may be

She has a baby, wonder what Spike will think of that....

Faith and Willow really shows what true friends is in this chapter. Or atleast that's what I think.

I just love this story, it's fast becoming one of my favourites.

please,please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Saya, you have no idea how great that is to hear. I've just finished writing the next TWO chapters [I know, who's the man?] so I'll be posting them up shortly :] Thank you!!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Wherever she may be

I am so happy that Spike thinks he is a ponce, and threw me a curve..Buffy has a baby !! I know I have to wait for more details, but wow ! I love how protective her friends are of her, and even Faith warmed my heart. So I can't wait to see how Spike handles all this, and realizes just who is the phoney, and who has character.... we all know, his turn now. Great story and thanks

Author's Response: No, thank you! You've been a consistently great reviewer Debbie, so thank you very much for your loyalty and kind words- it means SO MUCH to me

Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:56 am Title: Wherever she may be

A son? That's something I wasn't expecting. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks Maggie :)

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 09:04 am Title: Wherever she may be

hey great chap!! its nice to see Buffy has some people shecan count on. cant wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you Claire!

Reviewer: steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 08:19 am Title: Wherever she may be

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please god please I need or I will die!!!! could you live with that on your conciounce? heheh i cant spell that word

Author's Response: Ha ha ha! No, I don't think I could live with that- I guess I'll have to write more very quickly!!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 06:19 am Title: Wherever she may be

Wow wow wow. Love your chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you so so much!

Reviewer: CrazyInLoveWithSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Wherever she may be

OH!! you had to leave us hanging there, huh! lol well i'm in suspense mode here , it's getting really good and so much mystery upon mystery!! pls update soon! I dont want to wait too long for the next chapter! ;)

Author's Response: Lol- well I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I am Queen of Suspense- I love writing this story, so I can assure you that the next chapter will be up very soon!! xx

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 03:42 am Title: Wherever she may be

i cannot wait to see what happens next!! i love this story!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Rosie!! xx

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Wherever she may be

every chapter only further increases my love for this story...freakin' loved this chapter!!!...so buffy has a kid and spike feels like an idiot...and angel's the dad?..that part is just a guess but anyway loved the chapter and cant wait for more...well i can..but really who wants to?...

Author's Response: He he- thank you ash! I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story! Next chapter will hold even more revelations, and it'll be up really soon :]

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 01:38 am Title: Wherever she may be

Just came across your fic and love it! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Aww- I'm glad you found and liked it :] The next update will be soon!

Reviewer: Aprilyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2006 - 11:39 pm Title: Wherever she may be

Good Chapter...can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you Aprilyn xx

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2006 - 10:43 pm Title: Wherever she may be

This is killing me!! But in that wonderful story kind of way.! More soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol- hopefully you won't die before the next chapter is up!! Thank you sooooo much for the sweet review!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: Wherever she may be

whoa...lots of Faith bassing on Spike...

I liked it!!!

i love how she barely let him get a word in, such a Faith thing to do.

so...Harry...is he Faith's? i don't think he's Buffy's, cause no one's said anything about Buffy ever being pregnant. but would Faith leave he child...i don't think so, well maybe...i don't know...I'm confused!!!

so this is a short review for me...but it was just one big scene, so please forgive me!! i'll do better next time...I PROMISE! :)

more please!

Author's Response: More on its way, just for you my friend :) Like I said, you're a star! xx

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: The search

ok, so i know there's already another chapter after this, but i felt the need to review anyways, but i'm gonna make it short!

so, the stern talking to from Joyce...check (i knew it!). i'm glad you had him go out looking for her that night, not later on.

so i thought there was going the be this huge break through with the whole going to her house situation, but it wasn't even her house....very clever! good work :)

and her parents, my words....ass holes!!

and then Harrison again...who or what in the world is that!?!?!?

:)

Author's Response: Lol- thank you Laura Liz- even your 'short reviews' seem to be long, you little star! I appreciate everything you say hun

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