[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 02:39 pm Title: The Yearbook
She'd been stood up?!
*smacks Spike on the upside of the head*
Author's Response: Lol :)
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 02:16 pm Title: The Yearbook
Oh poor Buffy!!! i love ur new chap its great!!!! im glad that Spike now knows that its Buffy in the picture !!!
Its sad that he stood her up coz although he didn't play a joke on her now he did stand her up which to her was just as hurtful!!! but im sure u know wat it is ur gonna do with this story and ur doin really well so far!!!
i can't wait for more so please update soon !!!!!
Author's Response: Hee hee- thank you so much claire!! I'll update soon, scout's honour! dee xx
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 02:11 pm Title: The Yearbook
Yikes. I know Spike is confused and torn about things, but did he not realize that standing Buffy up without even a telephone call was as bad as taking her to the Bronze and embarassing her there? Poor girl...
Author's Response: I know, poor Buffy *thinks about spike begging on his knees a little more* Squee. Next update soon, I promise :]
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: The Yearbook
I never took the time to review and I'm really sorry for that but WOW, your story is amazing!! I feel so bad for Buffy.
Please update soon, I cant wait to see what's gonna happen with Spike!
P.S : sorry for my english :/
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for taking the time to review- you made me feel fantastic, so thank you again! And don't worry about your english- it's perfect hun :]
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 01:16 pm Title: The Yearbook
I have to say that Spike is an idiot of extremes! Shows you what a fool women can make men. I'd have to seriously reconsider respecting anybody who would like somebody like Drusilla. I want to just give Buffy a call. At least he could have given her a call, dropped by, something! I know being stood up is much better than what would have happend at the Bronze, but that's scarring. This story is great, because you've made me so passionate about these characters. I actually care and hope for early updates. Brilliant!
Author's Response: Hee hee- thank you so much. Early updates just for you my friend!! And I know what you mean, poor Buffy, Spike shall have to beg on his knees to make it up to her *thinks about spike on his knees for a while* Mmmm...
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 01:13 pm Title: The Yearbook
okay...so we're gonna do this cronologically today....(is that how you spell that?) who cares...
i love the book Buffy got him. so thoughtful, but he didn't even thank her for it!! i realize he was pissed at her at the time, but he was still supposed to be pretending to like her, and hello... i'm sure he actually loved the book.
next order of business...asking her out. i love Buffy's reaction, but it's paintful to know that Spike didn't mean a word he said...or didn't mean it at that moment. but how can he not feel a liitle bad, i mean she was crying...but i would probably cry buckets of happy tears if Spike ask me out too.... :) ahh living in the dream world is so nice!!
and Joyce...gotta love her. i love that she's known Buffy for two days but is already happy she didn't have to play matchmaker. i was surpirsed that Bufy was so excited in front of her. but i'm still going with my theory that she has no one else at home to be happy to. Joyce is already so protective of Buffy and i love it, with her telling Spike not to hurt her.
next! :) the yearbook. so i'd like to point out that i did guess the person in the picture was a realative, so i take that as being partly right, i mean Buffy is realated to herself! ;). but i actually didn't even think that the picture was of her. good work! heehee.
Spike's reactions seem to have a pattern going on here. he finds out something he doesn't like about Buffy, which is of course false, then gives he the cold shoulder and the charade is in place, then finds out the information is wrong, and feels bad. well he should feel bad. the boy assumes way too much!!
so lastly...the ending. that hurt. i love how you described everything though, very nicely done. but i want to know where Spike actually was, cause he couldn't thave been at home or else Joyce would've torn him a new one, and made him go to Buffy's quickly. ALSO!!!! he was going to pick he up at her house....major news!!! Buffy never wanted him near her house before, and now when he was gonna be there, and he stood her up!! not cool.
so, i'm gonna live in my happy world and assume the reason he stood he up is because he didn't want to take her to the bronze with Dru and everyone there because he didn't want to humiliate her, and if he told her they were going somewhere else, more private, Buffy might think Spike was trying the hide the fact the he asked her out...yep, that must be it. but boy do i feel bad for her...explaination time!!!
boy am i tired...love the fic...obviously... more please :)
Author's Response: Ahh- you truly are one of the greatest reviewers ever! Such attention to detail makes me feel great!! I can't wait for you to read the next chapter [it'll be up, soon as] And thank you so so much for being so nice [and appreciative!!] about my fic!! It took me so long to read your review, but d'you know what? I was smiling the whole time! If you keep reading, I promise you will have your questions answered. So thank you!!!! xxx
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 12:41 pm Title: The Yearbook
Oh, crap! This is not good! Oh, poor Buffy. I wonder why Spike stood her up!?! I can't wait to see how you resolve this! Hopefully Buffy won't let Spike get away with this too lightly! Aarrgg! How rude of Spike! He's such a jerk! I'm really excited to see what happens! Please update asap! Thanks for doing such a great job writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Raven- I really appreciate your kind words
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 12:06 pm Title: The Yearbook
Aw, poor Buffy. But also kind of good for her otherwise she would've been humiliated and stuff. But she doesn't know that. She probably thinks Spike is an ass. All the drama ^-^ I really liked this chap.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. And that was what I was going for- Spike deciding not to show up to avoid humiliating her, but Buffy not knowing and being heart-broken :[ Thank you for reviewing lovie
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 11:34 am Title: The Yearbook
FIrst I'm glad that Spike saw the picture and realized what was going on but standing her up? Arrrggghhhhh! Please please please let him show up and talk to her! Loving this story~!
More updates please!
Author's Response: Lol- I know; bad Spike!! Don't worry, more updates soon :] Thank you for another lovely review Jenn!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:20 am Title: Tentative Friendship
I still love this story, pls update soon pls psl!! :D
Author's Response: Wish granted, I'll go and update right now hunny :]
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:19 am Title: Tentative Friendship
OOooOoHhh! this is gonna be good!! pls pls write the next chappy ! Why is it that people jump into so much conclusions before finding out the truth!! oh is he ever going to feel like s**t after he finds out!! this was a good chapter, since it leaves me asking for more!! and you said if we reviewed it would make you type faster so i'll leave this three times!! :D this is no . two, and I love your story so pls write the next chappy soon!
Author's Response: Ha ha- your 3x review is working it's magic over me!!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Tentative Friendship
OOooOoHhh! this is gonna be good!! pls pls write the next chappy ! Why is it that people jump into so much conclusions before finding out the truth!! oh is he ever going to feel like s**t after he finds out!! this was a good chapter, since it leaves me asking for more!! and you said if we reviewed it would make you type faster so i'll leave this three times!! :D
Author's Response: Lol- that might just work! Esepcially since I'm updating right now!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story sweetie!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
Good Chapter, I really hope Spike comes to his senses soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing Aprilyn!!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 04:43 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
Well if Spike thinks Buffy was in trouble... he started it. So maybe it was his fault, at last a bit. And now Buffy trusts Spike. Maybe too early. ~ Spike almost was suspicious about Dru. Too bad that he reacted wrong to the picture. He should check out the yearbooks. I guess it is Buffy in the picture. Till next chapter!
Author's Response: Lol- thank you for reviewing! Keep readin' hun :)
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 04:25 pm Title: Half smiles
Buffy was right not to trust Spike at the moment. But it seems as if she did believe his lie (to care) at the end. ~ Or not. She is avoiding him and told Willow and Xander that she wondered why he was nice. ~ Too bad; Spike let it slip where Buffy works. And she is not amused. I see.. they got her fired. I hope Spike starts to see Dru different now.
Author's Response: Thank you for another great review cordykitten!!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
First, I love the story. Post faster please. I have no talent for delayed gratification and I definitely need to read more now. And that was Buffy, wasn't it? And the death wishes were Dru's right? I know you won't tell us, and I am completely behind the author not telegraphing the plot as it's much more fun to read it in the story than to have the author spoil it for us, so don't tell us, write it, okay? But....really like the story. Now for the nitpicky. The word you're going for is 'spun', not 'span'. 'She spun around', not 'She span around'. If fixing it in any way delays getting the chapters out forget I said anything, though, because I have to know what happens next immediately. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response: Oops, thank you for pointing that out- sometimes things like that just slip my mind, so thank you for letting me know. Thank you for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
i love your story so far and i can't wait to read more of it! please update soon! i can't wait to read when spike finds out what really happened and what he does to the people who did it. i'm pretty certain that the other people in that pic wrote the messages at the bottom about Buffy! update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing jenny; the next chapter will be up very soon. I'm glad you're enjoying the story hun!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
gotta tell you i dont really leave reviews, it is quite rare for me but your story is an exception, i have been reading it since you first posted it.. its such a good story that i couldnt help but review anyways keep up the good work and hope u post a new chapter soon :)
Author's Response: Well that's awesome for me to know! I'm so very glad you reviewed my story elle- I'll post the next chapter very soon, since you asked so nicely :)
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
this story's goin great. do type faster. i wanna get to the part where spike humiliates buffy, then he finds out the truth and then he has to beg, on his knees, for her forgiveness. ahh to live vicariously. type faster!
Author's Response: Hah- someone's a little blood thirsty, oui? Lol- thank you for the awesome review surfrchik275! I'll type as fast as my little fingers will allow, though perhaps even faster now!!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
Oh I have feeling that the person in that picture was really Buffy. And could it possibly be Drusilla that wrote those words. Or even Buffy if she has a self confidence issue. I hope Spike gets set straight if that is the case.
Author's Response: Don't worry, Spike will be discovering the truth [whatever the truth may be] veeeeeeery soon. Promise! Thank you for reviewing again s_o, it means a lot to me!! xxx
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
God :)! When I read the chapter 4 was dedicated to me :)! I feel honoured ;)! Thanks! You says "awesome review", but it's easy to write an awesome review when the story is so great :)!
And another chapter so soon, it's a beautiful day :)!
Spike and Buffy's relationship seems like a dance: one step ahead, one step back.
Here, during these 2 last chapters, several steps ahead: Spike sees Buffy, talks with her. He realizes that she is beautiful, kind, bright under her "thicker skin ". He tries to repair his mistake after she was fired and helps her to find a job. And of course, question (another one!): why does she need a job? And question n° 2: why doesn't she want him to see where she lives? (Where "Harrison" lives?)
And he feels guilty? Good, very good...
But finally, what a end you give us! A GIGANTIC step back! When Spike looks at this photograph and decides Buffy is a monster full with hatred and perversion... Because he thinks it's obviously Buffy on this photograph.
I said previously that Spike has probably this mental disease called "the knight in shining armor" syndrome. It seems he has some serious problems of sight too. First, he can't see what is in front of him. Then, he confuses Buffy ("dirty, irrationally angry, bitchy and a slut who would sleep with any guy") and Dru ("beautiful, mysterious, victimised and in need of his protection"): quite the contrary ;)! . And finally, he has big difficulties to keep his eyes open. Hey, when he "closed his eyes, coming to a decision" concerning the revenge on Buffy; very symbolic...
Yes, again, I write a long review, but because it comes after 2 chapters! Thanks again :)!
Author's Response: I love the way you described Buffy and Spike's relationship as a dance- so true to form, I might just have to slip that metaphor in there [with your permission of course!]
Your close attention to detail in your reviews make me feel so perfectly appreciated- it's like every single thing I intended to show, you have seen, and you have agreed with. It's intense! I rarely find someone who understands me and my writing so very well- so for that too- I thank you!
It's great that you're still asking questions, and don't worry, because eventually they will ALL be answered [I promise!] and hopefully, when that time comes you'll leave another fantastically long review!!
Thank you very much Klai- you deserved the chapter 4 dedication!! And thank you muchly for reviewing again!
dee xxxx
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
please update soon!! i just love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you again rosie! The next update will be so soon- blink and you might just miss it :P Keep readin' hun!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
oh no !!! things were goin so well !!!wow!! i love it !! i really liked that Spike was starting to feel differently towards Buffy and that maybe he should back out of the plan!!! but then things went all down hill from there poor Buffy!!!
great chap !!! cant wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: I know, what terrible luck? Still, things might get better again- I guess you'll just have to keep readin' to find out (see what I did there? lol) Thank you for reviewing again claire xxx
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:43 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
GREAT PLOT TWIST, YOU'RE REALLY DRAWING US INTO THE STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
Author's Response: Sure thing Margaret! Keep a look out for the next chapter, it'll be up very soon! xx
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: Tentative Friendship
I love this story, good plot and characters, keep it up please!
Author's Response: Thank you Toni- keep reading!! xx
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