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Date: 10/15/2007 - 08:24 pm Title: Closer

Oh I am hatting Dru, right now.

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Date: 10/15/2007 - 08:12 pm Title: Initiations

OH what are they going to do to Buffy and wonder what he will say when he finds out the truth.

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Date: 10/15/2007 - 08:03 pm Title: Beginnings

Oh I want to know more about what happened.

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Date: 04/08/2007 - 02:06 am Title: Deals and Conclusions

A great ending for a great story. :) Loved it!

Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 08:10 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

I love it you should really do a sequel

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Date: 01/14/2007 - 06:06 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

aaaww, I love this story. You're a very talented writer and I hope that I can be half as good as you are.

Reviewer: Clarisa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 07:27 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOVED THIS AWESOME FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =) =) =) . It's one of my favourites!!! :D :D :D.
Oh! I need to tell you someting but I don't know how cause I'm from Argentina and my english is not very good =( =( . Please, if you read this, send me an E-mail and I tell you everything: la_chapita22@hotmail.com
It's about something very good, but I need you permission..

Reviewer: Clarisa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 07:27 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOVED THIS AWESOME FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =) =) =) . It's one of my favourites!!! :D :D :D.
Oh! I need to tell you someting but I don't know how cause I'm from Argentina and my english is not very good =( =( . Please, if you read this, send me an E-mail and I tell you everithing: la_chapita22@hotmail.com
It's about something very good, but I need you permission..

Reviewer: Clarisa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: The Yearbook

I looooove this fic, but poor Buffy :'( ...

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Date: 12/24/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Initiations

I really hate Drusilla's gang!!!!.[Espero que Spike se de cuenta de dónde se está metiendo]

Reviewer: Clarisa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 07:25 pm Title: Beginnings

The history It's pretty good!!!. I can't tell you anything more 'cause my english it's a bit bad... =( . But I understand everithing that you write!! =) =) .

Reviewer: Squid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Deals and Conclusions

Where's the sequel? We need an ending.

Author's Response: Soon maybe =) Thank you muchly for reviewing.

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

YEEEEEEEEEETCHAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

The Big Day :)! I have to admit it, you succeed in going on surprising the readers :)!

I have expected a such end : Spike, in front of all the school, especially Dru, Angel and the rest of the Bitches Gang, confessing his love for Buffy.

But the way you write it: you are evil ;)! You have (almost) succeeded to scare me :)! Spike who acts as he keeps on with Dru's plan, with all the sweet words he says ( "I love her")... Hum, not kind to give such fear to Buffy ;).

The strange talk between Spike and Buffy is a so good idea :)!

And when everybody realizes who is in fact the girl Spike talks about! :) :) :) ! Only one word: de-li-cious :)!

More delicious: the souless bitch's reaction!

"Drusilla’s twisted out-cry"

“William, this was not the plan. This was not the plan at all.” Drusilla’s voice was shrill, and a constant annoyance to the bleached blond."

And at the end, you give us the portrait of a new family: Buffy, Spike, Harrison and Joyce.

"This was contentment.

This was bliss.

This was her life now."

A beautiful story, and an happy end :)! Thanks again :)!

But I can't help myself to ask, have you in mind a sequel? Not now, but perhaps, one day or another? Because, your story is so rich, with interesting characters, you could explore another paths.

Could it be possible to see Dru, Angel, Cordelia and the Bitches Gang knowing really the true meaning of the word "Karma"? Buffy's parents becoming the Shame of the Town, deserted by all because of their behavior with their own daughter and grand-son? The man who raped Buffy meeting justice and getting what he deserves? Buffy saying to her friends the truth concerning Harrison's birth?

And most important... Faith castrating Angel?

Thanks again :)!

Author's Response: Lol, some great ideas! I need to write the Faith/Angel castration scene, certainly!! Thank you so much for reviewing, it's so wonderful to hear that you enjoyed this story so much!! Thank you Klai!! xxx

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 05:36 pm Title: Spectre-Gray

Hey, long time, I know! A lot of work, and a big problem: time to read stories OR time to write reviews. But, to write a review, I need to read the story...

So Buffy talks to Spike. For the first time, she is not alone with this cruel past. "She didn’t have to carry it all alone anymore", yes it's true, when you are not alone to carry a burden, the burden is lighter.

And I like the way you write this chapter. No drama, no "Cry me a river". Total and simple. Direct. The naked truth. And it has more weight.

Spike understands the gift Buffy has given him when she has told him the truth. This wonderful girl trusts him! After him being (almost) a jerk (let's admit it, when he was in his "War against the Bad Buffy"'s thing, he acted in fact like a jerk!), Buffy trusts him enough to see him and only him worthy of knowing her secret!

"“I’m glad.” He said. “Buffy I’m so glad. And…” he paused, raising a hand to cup her cheek. “I’m sorry. Sorry I nearly believed them. Sorry for what I nearly did.”

It was time, boy! And in the same time he learns that the past object of his affection, Dru, does naughty things with Angel... Reality rocks!

The way Buffy talks about Harrison is so beautiful :)! Despite he is born of the rape, he is not for Buffy a reminder of her nightmare, but the one who helps his mother, saves her litteraly: “It was my son who pulled me through everything", “Harrison kept me alive.”

And finally, the Kiss. :)! A perfect way to close a chapter, with a certain deal... (So, Angel is not only a bastard and a moron, but a bad kisser? Color me surprised ;) ...)

I jump to the next chapter ;)!

Author's Response: Awwh! Hee hee, I was waiting to see whether you would review!! I'm so glad you did- once again, thank you so very much for all of your kind words. You're a star!! xx

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

I really had a great time reading this story and I'm crossing my fingers for a sequel, I really want to see Angel & Drusilla go down. Eh eh. Oh... and Buffy's parents too. I couldn't believe how cold hearted they were. Please keep up the great work!!!
:D

Author's Response: Oh, thank you Tanja. You're right though, the evil people do need to go down. Like I said, I have an idea for a sequel... Hmm =) hee hee!!

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

I enjoyed the story and the happy ending. It is always a bit odd for me to have Joyce not be Buffy's mom, but I see how it worked better for the story. It was nice to see Faith there watching Buffy's back. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you Sta :)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2006 - 03:17 am Title: Deals and Conclusions

very good story :)

Author's Response: Thankyou muchly x x

Reviewer: spikes_cj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2006 - 03:00 am Title: Deals and Conclusions

This could definitely use a sequel. There was still so much to cover. But I love the story. I hope it does continue, if you have a chance, and your muse allows it. But Buffy's parents have to find out the truth, and Drusilla and Angel have to get their comeuppance. Seriously.

Author's Response: Lol, you're not wrong there. And thank you so much for reviewing. Maybe there will be more for you to read soon :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

great story

Author's Response: Thank you sweetheart

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 10:43 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

Wonderful fic! Loved every minute of it!

Author's Response: Awwh, thank you so much! I loved every review you left for me!!

Reviewer: Sevvy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

That was really sweet. It could use an epilogue though. *winks*

Author's Response: Lol, thsnk you Sevvy :)

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

Yay!!! what an absolutely perfect ending. Spike's speech in front of the whole school was beautiful. I'm all happy now...:-)

Author's Response: Hooray! thank you so much tbs! That means the world to me sweetheart! All I need now is to see another chapter of Blood Child up, and I'll be as happy as a lamb :) x x

Reviewer: JenxGer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

Yup, I feel that you should really do a epilogue or a sequel, not just because it was wonderful up to the 2nd last chapter, but also because it ended too hastily.

Kinda like it plunged off the cliff at the climax and ended abruptly. But still, loved the style and story. Thanks for sharing :)

Author's Response: Really? Well perhaps I will have to write a sequel to make up for that fact- I do have something quite interesting in mind anyway. And thank you for reviewing too, it means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 02:21 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

Great story Dee, thanks for sharing! :)

Author's Response: That's okay :D And thank you very much for reviewing Opal x x

Reviewer: Lyndsy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 - 02:11 pm Title: Deals and Conclusions

I'm so happy that everything finally worked out! For a minute, when Spike told about everything he loved in her I really thought that he was an ass and I was ready to punch my computer screen in rage! But you are a great writer and you made it so beautiful... To put it in a nutshell, THANK YOU!! ;-D

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much Lyndsy! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! x x

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