Date: 10/19/2006 - 10:23 am Title: Fix You
Nice dialog and a different spin. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you Pin
Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:06 pm Title: Fix You
Very sweet chapter. I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you eve!
Date: 10/13/2006 - 07:11 am Title: Fix You
Loving the story! It's been a while since i've read fan-fic, but this is the perfect stuff to get me back into it and addicted good and proper!
Can I offer a bit of grammatical advice, though? (And I hope this doesn't come across as mean or snooty). The semi-colon ( ; ) is something you use to separate two sentences that could otherwise be split by a full stop. So basically both parts of the text on either side should read as complete sentences.... So, for example:
"She spins and kicks him in the head; causing him to stagger backward into a headstone" - the semi-colon here should probably be a comma, whereas if you had "She spins and kicks him in the head; the vampire staggers backward into a headstone", the semi-colon would be better placed. In the original, the two parts of the sentence wouldn't make sense sense on their own if the semi-colon was a full stop... if that makes sense? Sorry, that's totally nitpicky! But I remember learning little tidbits like this really helped me in my writing, so....
Anyway, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: No, not nit-picky at all. I've always been known to go a little overboard with my semi-colons, my English teacher underlines them whenever I write essays, so actually, thank you for explaining clearly how they're really used [in a non-patronizing way too] =] Also, thank you so much for letting me know how much you're enjoying the story- it means a lot to me =) xx
Date: 10/05/2006 - 07:11 pm Title: Fix You
ewww, riley!!! never liked him. wish it would've happened this way on the show!!! great job.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 08/02/2006 - 08:46 pm Title: Fix You
Yes, please .. a sequel!!!
Author's Response: Lol- thank you ekips!
Date: 07/31/2006 - 06:37 am Title: Fix You
o.k. asking prettily for sequelness please. (It's too good to leave it there,come on!)
Author's Response: Hee Hee- I already have somthing in mind hun! ~Watch this space~
Date: 07/31/2006 - 03:26 am Title: Fix You
Very nice. Wouldn't say no to a sequel.
Author's Response: Thank you Cas
Date: 07/31/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Fix You
This was absolutely lovely. I hope that you will write more. I can beg if you want. ; )
Author's Response: Hmm... Do I want you to beg? Sure, why not? Can't hurt... Hee hee hee!
Date: 07/31/2006 - 01:40 am Title: Fix You
Good story. You must write a sequel.
Author's Response: I must? Tee hee! I will!
Date: 07/31/2006 - 01:05 am Title: Fix You
i really like it. hope there's more to come!!
Author's Response: I may just continue it into a full-length fic hun! Thanks for the review Laura Liz!
Date: 07/30/2006 - 07:14 pm Title: Fix You
*nods* Sequel please. It would be nice not to let it end here :-)
Author's Response: Thank you cordykitten ~watch this space~ sequel pending- tee hee!
Date: 07/30/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Fix You
Sequels are of the good...I really like episode rewrites when they're done well---and I liked this oe even though I did like Fool For Love how it is....Good job :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Suzee :]]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 06:25 pm Title: Fix You
that was awesome!..i loved it...sequel please!!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much ash
Date: 07/30/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Fix You
Love it. Good Spike-Buffy interaction and snark here, and a Buffy/Riley scene that both makes me sad for him (!) and smugly satisfied at his obliviousness at the same time.
Sequel? Yes, please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much hun- I think there will be a sequel [since I've thought about it quite a lot] Cheers for the review :]