Date: 10/19/2006 - 10:31 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Love your crazy Riley and the dialog. Great progress. THanks!
Author's Response: Thank you =]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:17 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Can someone please beat up riley a bit, ok a lot? great chapter
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks eve! xx
Date: 10/06/2006 - 07:07 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
I thought Buffy would have more of a reaction when Riley slapped her. That behavior certainly was not appropriate.
Why is she so mean to Spike I hope there are going to be some periods of niceness in your story. Good Chapter, please update.
Author's Response: Thank you, and don't worry- niceness is definately on its way...
Date: 10/06/2006 - 01:29 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Omg I love this fanfic! Deffaintly wished this was the way it turned out! Can't wait for the next chapter! :P
Author's Response: Awwh, thank you very much
Date: 10/06/2006 - 06:19 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Just found your story, it sounds really great!
More please;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so- thanks!!
Date: 10/06/2006 - 05:51 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Great so far. I like feisty Buffy though I'm surprised she didn't react to Riley slapping her. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you jane :)
Date: 10/06/2006 - 04:50 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
definitely good so far
Author's Response: Thank you Lovie x x
Date: 10/06/2006 - 02:34 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
I like the last line of this chapter. It was overall good. Please update soon.
Thanx
Author's Response: Thank you, I promise I will.
x x
Date: 10/06/2006 - 01:21 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
i remember reading the first chapter before and i thought it was a oneshot. well, now that you added to it, not so sure how i feel about this story. i'm confused by the way they act with each other and i have to say that this is a bit out of character to me. riley would never act like that for one. i really hate how everyone always makes him such a jerk when he really wasn't on the show. and i don't understand how buffy can still consider spike to be an enemy after he saved her. they haven't really been enemies for a long time and she should know that, whether he saved her or not. hopefully she'll stop being such a bitch to him. i might keep reading to see what happens next. obviously i know where spike plans to lead her.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you thought they were OOC, there is a reason for Buffy to act a little strangely, something that I hope will become evident in the next chapter. The main reason for Buffy's easy dismissal, however, is that huge and ugly wall she has built around her heart. PLEASE give this story a chance- and thanks for reviewing all the same :)
Date: 10/06/2006 - 01:07 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hI JUST FINISHED THIS CHAPTER AND THOUGHT i WOULD REVIEW IT. I REALLY LIKED IT AND THE WRITING WAS FANTASTIC. YOU HAVE definitely caught my attention. Sorry about all caps I didn't notice until then it was on. cindy
Author's Response: Hee hee [don't worry about the CAPS love!] And thank you so much- I'm glad you're enjoying it!! x x
Date: 10/06/2006 - 12:11 am Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Wow. This is great. Intense, edge-of-the -seat, exciting stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you- I'm glad you thought so!! x x
Date: 10/05/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
There goes Buffy's defense mechanism. Being mean and angry. Pooh. Stating the obvious, but Riley's a bastard in this fic.
Author's Response: Yep :( Thank you for the review :)
Date: 10/05/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
wow that was great, want more.
Author's Response: Thank you! And more you shall recieve!
Date: 10/05/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
Riley forgot to whom he was talking to... and now Buffy is breaking up with him. (YAY!)
Now I wonder what Spike is up to.
Author's Response: Hee hee, wait and see cordykitten :)
Date: 10/05/2006 - 07:38 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
I'm enjoying this ........ more please :)
Author's Response: Sure thing nat ;)
Date: 10/05/2006 - 07:25 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Great! Thank you for the review!
Date: 10/05/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: When you try your best but you don't succeed
buffy can be such a bitch sometimes. *sighs* loved it lots. please post soon. great job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)