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Reviewer: Djilana Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2004 - 01:44 pm Title: Made For Each Other
Date: 05/13/2004 - 01:44 pm Title: Made For Each Other
really loved the build up of it all but glad to find they got in on ;-) just hope things'll all work out now
Reviewer: Melorah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2004 - 10:19 pm Title: Made For Each Other
Date: 05/11/2004 - 10:19 pm Title: Made For Each Other
"reveling in the feel of her cavern... " ?Please. You have a great concept with this story. Why do you ruin it with cliches and crappy analogies? Find your own way of writing, your own words, your own poetry, not what others have used in the past. I still like the story. It just isn't put together well.