Date: 04/19/2015 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter Five
Great exchange between Xander and Buffy -
Date: 02/25/2007 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter Five
Great chapter. Sets up future events and challenges very nicely. Buffy and Xander dialogue was a bit heavy, but definitely needed.
Author's Response: Thank you! And, yes, I read back over that chappie and it was a bit heavy handed. So is the dialogue in the next chapter, I fear. Eep. I tried not to go too far over the top, but sometimes it's hard to guage until some time has passed. Ah well...So happy you're enjoying it!
Date: 01/16/2007 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Five
Hmm. I wonder what a level four dimension is really like. I think the Buffy crew could totally deal with a Day Of The Dead one but that's just me. I'm glad Xander and Buffy had this talk. It's a good thing that they can be at least remotely honest with each other.
Date: 09/26/2006 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Five
great interaction with xander and buffy, very realistic. please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Date: 09/25/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Five
Wow, who knew Xander could give such subtle good advice. Well done chaps. I especially liked the line with Illyria and Buffy about "he told the shell" and buffy replying "he went to the beach" and then illyria's "possibly but that's not relevant" that was priceless. Thanks for chuckles and for the promise of good stuff in the next chap.
Author's Response: Heh. Xander is a man of hidden depths. ;-) And I really love it when people find humor where I hoped they would. Thank you ever so!
Date: 09/24/2006 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter Five
So a hard decision for Buffy ahead because Faith isn't an option: Will she go and maybe endanger Spike or will she stay and endanger Angel? Or let Illyria go on her own.
Ah Illyria thinks that she will go herself, alone if she has to and Buffy stays with Spike. Seems she is guessing something too what Buffy did. And she told her the reason (Spike's thoughts) why he didn't came looking for her when she was back. Spike and her still have to talk about that.
I like your Mrs. Hudson :)
Good to see that Xander has changed now; Anya did help (loosing her) I think.
Author's Response: Thank you, cordykitten! And I'm very glad you like Mrs. Hudson 'cause I do, too. Heh.
Date: 09/24/2006 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter Five
Can you please bring Anya back too, if only for a few moments? Ugh, this is good by the way.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you! As for Anya, I'll give it some thought. But if not this one, then perhaps another story. I do love her, too,
Date: 09/24/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Five
The conversation between Buffy and Xander was very well done. It's kinda what I've always wanted to hear. This is such a good story.
Author's Response: We didn't get that kind of closure on the show, so thank goodness for fan fic, eh? Heh. Am very pleased you like it. Thank you!