Oh, I love it! I really like how the 'real' Spike is able to show himself to Buffy, because she'll let him. like in the show, she wouldn't let him have fun and be himself around her, but in your story she does, and I think that was the one difference that could have made their relationship on the show work. If Buffy could have just accepted him into her life, everything could have been wonderful. Because she didn't, we have fanfic! I love it, update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Heh, yes, I definitely see fanfic as the way to 'correct' things I didn't like about the show. I think my Buffy also had a lot of freedom and support that canon-Buffy didn't. It's a lot easier to have a risky affair if you're not also crushed fanacially and trying to raise a teenage sister. Stay tuned! I'm currently drafting the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing.