Date: 12/22/2006 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter Five
Extremely excited to find much more of the story here. I'm not a Willow fan and this just fed my desire to slap her over the head with hard things. I love how Buffy's thinking about things and that finally it's becoming reality to her. I'm really enjoying this tale.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Five
Darn Willow, why couldn't she be all understando-girl; that's what our poor Buffy needed. Once again, wonderfully done- I loved Spike's beautiful reaction to seeing Buffy again [he cried and I was thoroughly charmed!!] Buffy's reassurance to him was so sweet. I adore this! xx
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 10/18/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Five
Ah good, Buffy is alive. So it went like we know. Mmm Spike bit her .. and the way Buffy reacted Spike was right, the mark is visible and there now instead the one of the master. (Though his is no claim bite? *wonders*) But something is there now (or she wouldn't get that feeling).
Sorry to see that Buffy opened up to Willow but she didn't believe her. Good I guess that Buffy didn't tell her more. Looking forward what Buffy will do now.
Author's Response: Nope, not a claim bite, not yet anyway. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 10/18/2006 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter Five
good beginning chapter but at the end i got threw off because i didnt know if he really bit her or if it was all a dream to her
Author's Response: He bit her in the dream but Buffy felt the effects outside of it, hence the talk with Willow. Hopefully that clears things up, but let me know if you're still confused. And thanks so much fo continuing to take the time to review.
Date: 10/18/2006 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Five
wills wasn't even trying to hear buffy out. how rude is that???? please post soon. are spike and dru gonna be crashing into town anytime soon. i think it's time for buffy to see her dream guy while she's awake. lol. great job. loved it lots.
Author's Response: They'll meet soon, I promise! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 10/17/2006 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Five
Stupid Willow! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/17/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Five
Very good chapter. I really like how you work out this conversation. It fits nicely into the framework that we saw of Buffy's friends hearing what they want to hear, but never really listening. Glad that Buffy found out who she can trust, and who she can't. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yes. That's exactly what I was going for, so I'm glad you caught that. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Yes. That's exactly what I was going for, so I'm glad you caught that. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 10/17/2006 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Five
Love, love, love this.
Very well written, especially Buffy's POV - you can feel her confusion, disappointment and slight desperation.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 10/17/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter Five
That was great, I loved the inner convo during Buffy's talk with Willow. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review!