[Report This]Date: 10/22/2006 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter Six
After the slayer line has parted, Buffy feels stronger, more of the slayer then before? Sounds as if the line is going through her and that the Council doesn't like her being stronger. I hope they won't try to kill her. Duh.. especially know they now 'a slayer is about to find her mate'... Regarding the Council that sounds as if Buffy is in danger now.
And Buffy did some research on her own, in secret ~ yet Giles found out. And he will remember it. I hope, when he calls Travers, he won't say too much. ~ Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/22/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter Six
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Just updated! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 10/22/2006 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter Six
Really loving this! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review.
[Report This]Date: 10/18/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Five
Ah good, Buffy is alive. So it went like we know. Mmm Spike bit her .. and the way Buffy reacted Spike was right, the mark is visible and there now instead the one of the master. (Though his is no claim bite? *wonders*) But something is there now (or she wouldn't get that feeling).
Sorry to see that Buffy opened up to Willow but she didn't believe her. Good I guess that Buffy didn't tell her more. Looking forward what Buffy will do now.
Author's Response: Nope, not a claim bite, not yet anyway. Thanks for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 10/18/2006 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter Five
good beginning chapter but at the end i got threw off because i didnt know if he really bit her or if it was all a dream to her
Author's Response: He bit her in the dream but Buffy felt the effects outside of it, hence the talk with Willow. Hopefully that clears things up, but let me know if you're still confused. And thanks so much fo continuing to take the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 10/18/2006 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Five
wills wasn't even trying to hear buffy out. how rude is that???? please post soon. are spike and dru gonna be crashing into town anytime soon. i think it's time for buffy to see her dream guy while she's awake. lol. great job. loved it lots.
Author's Response: They'll meet soon, I promise! Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Five
Stupid Willow! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Five
Very good chapter. I really like how you work out this conversation. It fits nicely into the framework that we saw of Buffy's friends hearing what they want to hear, but never really listening. Glad that Buffy found out who she can trust, and who she can't. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yes. That's exactly what I was going for, so I'm glad you caught that. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Yes. That's exactly what I was going for, so I'm glad you caught that. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Five
Love, love, love this.
Very well written, especially Buffy's POV - you can feel her confusion, disappointment and slight desperation.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter Five
That was great, I loved the inner convo during Buffy's talk with Willow. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review!
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter Four
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Four
Loved Spike going through the motions, his feelings. So I hope he'll try to find a way to help her, get her back.
Author's Response: They'll find a way to each other again, not to worry. Thanks for the kind review!
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2006 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter Four
soooo buffy's coming back right???? i mean, she has to! this can't be the end!!!!! lol. loved it lots. post soon.
Author's Response: No where near the end! Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2006 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Four
i hope she really isnt dead
Author's Response: Of course not! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter Four
that chappy made me almost cry... They HAVE to meet soon!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry! Hopefully this chapter is happier for you! Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2006 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter Three
For Buffy the dream is real, Spike is real. And now she has to die...
Prophecies are never good when they end that way. And Spike thinks he isn't able to help? Bad indeed. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review!
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Two
loved it. dont know how i missed this update but i loved it. on with the next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Mucho thanks for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Three
loved it. how is this going to play out from now on??? I mean, are buffy and spike going to meet in real life and if they do will they be enemies and all??? post soon. loved it lots.
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. ; )Thanks so much for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2006 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Two
loved it. dont know how i missed this update but i loved it. on with the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2006 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter Three
Sooo good! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reveiwing.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2006 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter Three
now we know she does not stay dead, will she and spike find each other in dreams afterward or not until he comes to sunnydale. great update btw.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Three
Can't wait for more! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Just updated! Thanks for the kind review!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Three
It... is... so... SAD! (sob) really great story, more updates please!:)
Author's Response: It'll get happier, don't worry. And thank you for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Three
please dont let her die
Author's Response: It wouldn't be Buffy is she stayed dead now would it. : ) Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Two
great story more please
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad your enjoying it.
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