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Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 12:53 pm Title: Captivating

Spike the man whore? Oh, I love it!
Great start!! xx

Reviewer: bob Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: Captivating

ditto i love this story so much plz plz plz write a sequel

Reviewer: Sevvy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2006 - 05:03 am Title: Captivating

This is such a cute story! I hope you continue. =)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Captivating

The plot sounds interesting. (And the other reviewer is right: You should try to get a beta. It isn't always easy to see his own errors. Especially words that a spell check wouldn't get like spike, Spike, defiantly, definitely. I should know, when I forget to read a review properly I'm making the same mistake.) Well because Spike is a 'ladies man' he can't object Buffy's choice of work.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 09:28 pm Title: Captivating

hmmmm....wonder who the blond could be??? lol. great job. please post soon. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: stacy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Captivating

okay, not trying to be rude, but this fiction needs a lot of work. it's a bit hard to read. i would suggest spacing it out better and it couldn't hurt to get a beta reader. i just skimmed it and caught a lot of mistakes. for one, it's bloody, not bluddy. it does sound like a good idea, but a lot needs to be fixed. just something to keep in mind.

Author's Response: ive changed the spelling of bloody my spellcheck wasnt working at the time and ive spaced it out a lot better but thanx for the comment otherwise i wouldnt have realised

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 08:42 pm Title: Captivating

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 07:25 pm Title: Captivating

Ooh this excellent. Most certainly NOT rubbish. I love it when it's that instant, across-the-room attraction for those two...more soon pretty please?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 07:09 pm Title: Captivating

I'm guessing the girl is Buffy of course! I can't wait for the two to meet! So who is Buffy's little brother and sister and how old is she? Update soon please!

Reviewer: dragotiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: Captivating

cant wait to see where this fic goes. love it so far.

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