Date: 10/31/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
I can't wait to read more! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you.
The next chapter is up!
spuf
Date: 10/30/2006 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
That's a lot of hits. You kind of gave a bit away, I can't wait to see how it works out. Good chapter, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Spike is going to show up soon.
spuf
Date: 10/30/2006 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
Hope Buffy gets herself and Dawn out safely! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Late response, sorry.
New chapter up.
Thanks.
spuf
Date: 10/29/2006 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
great update
Author's Response: Thanks!
spuf
Date: 10/29/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
I really enjoyed this chapter! The gathering of information, the history of them...it was great! :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
I try to be detailed.
spuf
Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
I figured that Giles would be related to Spike not Fred. I love it.
Author's Response: No, it's Fred.
Giles is going to figure prominently soon.
Thanks,
spuf
Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
I think the plot is progressing nicely, and I appreciate the info you dropped on us in your author's note. :D
I liked the way Buffy handled herself during her reunion with Angel, and I loved the her interaction with Dawn. It was nice to see Buffy's battered heart melt when she met Dawn. Spike's backstory was interesting, Spike as a farmer should be fun. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you.
More soon....Spike will be showing up real soon!
spuf
Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Getting Out'
Ah back in the mansion.. good that Buffy doesn't fall for Angel's tricks (pout, slight Irish brogue etc.). And Angel is blaming Ethan for what he did back then? Oh how easy. ~ And I hope too that Dawn did hear something that will be good for them to escape. Hopefully Buffy will get her China first :)
So Spike is truly British... never been away from his farm much? Too sad that his parents died so young.
Seems as if Buffy won Dawn's trust now. And when guessing the next chapter right they'll try and escape! ~ Ah... that's how you'll connect both paths.. Fred is related to Giles! A good cover for Buffy and Dawn. Looking forward to read more.
Author's Response: Sorry for the late thanks!
spuf