Date: 01/13/2007 - 06:10 pm Title: The Monster in the Man
ooh, wow. intense bit with insight into William's hatred of Spike...poor William. Now it's time to delve into the mytery of Buffy's sickness. Excellent chapter!
Date: 01/12/2007 - 03:42 am Title: The Monster in the Man
Great chapter!! That was way intense. I'm glad they got that out, they needed to.
Date: 01/08/2007 - 09:42 pm Title: The Monster in the Man
OMG, I just started today to read this fic and I must tell you that I’m speechless; I just could not stop until I got to the final chapter you posted.
The story is great and original, and so well written; I can’t wait to read more and more so please keep it up and thanks for gifting us with such great reading material.
Ash.
Date: 01/07/2007 - 10:36 am Title: The Monster in the Man
Their fighting got hot but the same way their issues did. And Buffy hit the bullseye now, why William is so angry. I hope they can go over it and sort it all out. Looking forward to the answer (how Buffy got sick). Good chapter, don't worry.
Date: 01/07/2007 - 07:20 am Title: The Monster in the Man
I love the way you have William wanting her so badly, but just like Spike, wanting all of her~ not being satisfied with anything less. For the few times that Spike actually threw Buffy out, it was because would occassionally get the self-respect that this William seems to have. I also adore the way Buffy finally "gets" where William's anger comes from, and how she realizes how much she's hurt him. Excellent update! I'm really looking forward to more. Soon, please? ;)
Date: 01/06/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: The Monster in the Man
nice update. It'll be intersting to see why she created Sunnydale
Date: 01/06/2007 - 06:54 pm Title: The Monster in the Man
Even more interesting...
Date: 01/06/2007 - 12:44 pm Title: The Monster in the Man
This is incredible.
From light-hearted to sweltering to emotionally devastating and finally suspenseful, this chapter is perfection.
I am reduced to begging for more...
Date: 01/06/2007 - 12:42 pm Title: The Monster in the Man
This is one of the chapters I have been waiting for, although maybe Buffy could have gotten a little nooky first.;-) Creating Spike the way she did in reaction to her perceived betrayel by Will makes perfect sense. It also fits very well that Will would be angry with her because of Spike. Very well done!! I can't wait to find out the answer to the question she posed to the doctor at the end.
Date: 01/06/2007 - 09:02 am Title: The Monster in the Man
Whoa! William was really harboring some serious issues, should be interesting to see if he and Buffy can work past them. Great chapter.
Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:18 am Title: The Monster in the Man
very good question. why did buffy get sick??? and will willaim have enough heart in him to forgive her for what she's done/??? loved it lots and lots. post soon.
Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:10 am Title: The Monster in the Man
i hate William.........