Date: 01/27/2007 - 11:07 pm Title: Surprise!
Loved it :) And like Buffy forgot the fact that she is (was) a virgin I totally didn't think of it. Loved it (funny lines = good ones too).
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:11 am Title: Surprise!
I was a little surprised that he stopped when he realized she was a virgin, but I absolutely loved the line about no man should have to follow int he footsteps of a woman's imagination! LOL!! Very nice that Will has some true memories, and now it makes sense that the person Buffy had sex with the most in Sunnyhell was her actually boy toy back home. Very nice, and thank you for the quick update. More soon, please!
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:16 am Title: Surprise!
Sudden case of toplessness...perhaps one of the best lines ever written. Love it!
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: Surprise!
yay!!!!! loved it lots and lots. and spike ended up giving buffy her first orgasm. love this reality waaaaay much better. lol. more soon. great job.
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Surprise!
Wow, didn't see that coming. I totally didn't even think about it. Very good!
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Surprise!
I was wondering about that.....I had a feeling that they would both forget and I love the way you handled the aftermath.
Looking forward to more.
Date: 01/25/2007 - 05:52 pm Title: Surprise!
I totally forgot about Buffy's body being virginal too! What a great twist that also makes perfect sense. I'm really glad that Will took the whole thing in stride, instead of being completely weirded out by it. Great chapter!
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:08 pm Title: Surprise!
great chapter.. this story just keeps getting better & better :)
Date: 01/25/2007 - 02:41 pm Title: Surprise!
(You know, Buffy's got a pretty good imagination if she just made up all that Spuffy sex ;-)) I'd actually wondered what would happen about her having sex--I think you wrote it better than anything I could have possibly thought of....though you are doing that with the whole story, so....
Sorry about not reviewing this earlier...I read 1-16 all together the other day and then 17 quickly when it was posted..but I"ve been copying chapters off TSR to read while I'm looking after my puppy so I haven't been here to review. This is one of my favorite stories though; it even says so on y little list ;-)
Anyway, I hope you can update it soon because I just love how you're doing the whole story :) Thanks for posting
Date: 01/25/2007 - 12:12 pm Title: Surprise!
Interesting chapter... like Buffy I totally forgot about her still being a virgin. I enjoyed Buffy and William's conversation following the virginity revelation, and i'm sure Buffy's first time with William will definitely live up and surpass her fantasy first time with the broody one. ~_^ Wonderful update!
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:51 am Title: Surprise!
oh good update!! this story is just getting better and better. I'm wondering if there might be a twist at the end...hmm... ill leave it up to you. Hope to see more soon!