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Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: The first time

Hi! I have quite a few chaps to catch up on apparently. Not sure if you got my email the other day. I've been offline for most of January off and on and my old address has been obsolete now for about three weeks, so I don't know if you've been sending me stuff. I'm sorry I disappeared so suddenly--my old server shut us down a day early so I didn't get to email people to warn them and now I'm scrambling. Can you email me on megpf27@gmail.com and let me know if I gave you a password for EF ( I know, very scatterbrained.) And the title of this chapter alone makes me want to hurry up and read on, LOL. Reviews soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 11:07 pm Title: Surprise!

Loved it :) And like Buffy forgot the fact that she is (was) a virgin I totally didn't think of it. Loved it (funny lines = good ones too).

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:11 am Title: Surprise!

I was a little surprised that he stopped when he realized she was a virgin, but I absolutely loved the line about no man should have to follow int he footsteps of a woman's imagination! LOL!! Very nice that Will has some true memories, and now it makes sense that the person Buffy had sex with the most in Sunnyhell was her actually boy toy back home. Very nice, and thank you for the quick update. More soon, please!

Reviewer: SixStringBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:16 am Title: Surprise!

Sudden case of toplessness...perhaps one of the best lines ever written. Love it!

Reviewer: SixStringBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:53 pm Title: A really real date

Soooo hot! Makes me all itchy with anticipation...

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: Surprise!

yay!!!!! loved it lots and lots. and spike ended up giving buffy her first orgasm. love this reality waaaaay much better. lol. more soon. great job.

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Surprise!

Wow, didn't see that coming. I totally didn't even think about it. Very good!

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Surprise!

I was wondering about that.....I had a feeling that they would both forget and I love the way you handled the aftermath.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 05:52 pm Title: Surprise!

I totally forgot about Buffy's body being virginal too! What a great twist that also makes perfect sense. I'm really glad that Will took the whole thing in stride, instead of being completely weirded out by it. Great chapter!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:08 pm Title: Surprise!

great chapter.. this story just keeps getting better & better :)

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 02:41 pm Title: Surprise!

(You know, Buffy's got a pretty good imagination if she just made up all that Spuffy sex ;-)) I'd actually wondered what would happen about her having sex--I think you wrote it better than anything I could have possibly thought of....though you are doing that with the whole story, so....

Sorry about not reviewing this earlier...I read 1-16 all together the other day and then 17 quickly when it was posted..but I"ve been copying chapters off TSR to read while I'm looking after my puppy so I haven't been here to review. This is one of my favorite stories though; it even says so on y little list ;-)

Anyway, I hope you can update it soon because I just love how you're doing the whole story :) Thanks for posting

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 12:12 pm Title: Surprise!

Interesting chapter... like Buffy I totally forgot about her still being a virgin. I enjoyed Buffy and William's conversation following the virginity revelation, and i'm sure Buffy's first time with William will definitely live up and surpass her fantasy first time with the broody one. ~_^ Wonderful update!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:51 am Title: Surprise!

oh good update!! this story is just getting better and better. I'm wondering if there might be a twist at the end...hmm... ill leave it up to you. Hope to see more soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 10:34 pm Title: A really real date

*smile* Buffy asked Spike for a date? And he agreed. :)
Awe, how nice: Buffy decided for a picnic, just the two of them.
*gg* Indeed, in Wlliam's home they should be undisturbed. *g* Loved it.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 08:57 am Title: A really real date

Wow! I can't believe I haven't seen this story before now. It is simply amazing. Just my luck that this is the last chapter I find too. lol I'll be looking for more. ; )

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 06:53 am Title: A really real date

Very, very nice! Looking forward to getting to see William at home, devouring his girl. Kinda weird that the guy stops, though, huh? Really, that is the very true-to-life and confusing thing about dating in modern times! LOL. You do a great job of showing the heat that Buffy is feeling, and the need for her lover.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 04:09 am Title: A really real date

Souless Spike wishes he could be this evil! Gahhhhh, you can't leave it there - update soon pleeeeeeeeeease!

Reviewer: s_o Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:20 am Title: A really real date

I am so very addicted to this story. I just love how you wrote William and this chapter was really sweet! =)

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 01:49 am Title: A really real date

I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY AND THE OH SO PRETTY BANNER. THANKS

Reviewer: katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 12:37 am Title: A really real date

nuh huh?!!!!! next chapter!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry, just read full lot up until this chapter when are you going to post new one?!!! hurry please!

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 11:58 pm Title: A really real date

Well that was just.....evil!

Besides said evilness, lovely chapter as always. It seems that Joyce has relaxed significantly since their talk and I enjoyed her comment regarding the date. Buffy's use of a classic trick to get close was appreciated and brought back some fond memories.

Sexy and sweet; desperately awaiting more!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 02:14 pm Title: A really real date

a very sweet chapter, can't wait for next update. Can you write as fast as William will drive??

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 01:35 pm Title: A really real date

yay!! love it

Reviewer: squawks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 12:44 pm Title: A really real date

i think the real question is, "how fast can you write?" cos i want more! great writing please update soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 10:41 am Title: A really real date

I gotta say i'm really loving how Buffy and William's date is playing out. I liked that Buffy was the one doing the asking out, and I also liked her little white lie to get William to snuggle with her. Fantastic chapter! ~ I'm glad you were able to make your banner larger, I loved the coloring, and the pix you used... nice work! :D

Author's Response: Oh bugger. I completely forgot to put the banner in this time. I've fixed that now. I'm so glad you mentioned it. And thank you for the wonderful review also.

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