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Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Ok, 5 bullets, but 3 shots from Buffy....who shot him then... I hope that Buffy and William will be soon reunited...this situation is nerve racking, and Buffy deserves some peace and love now... so does Spike, after all, he has proved his love through and through.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 08:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

so she is turning herself in, wonder what will happen when she gets there. They now seem to know that she did hit the wall but not kill him.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 07:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Thanks, Fred.

Now, they need a pathologist to estimate the angle of imapct from the bullets in Liam - cuz they always do an autopsy when there's been a murder - and see if there's enough there to tell where the murderer was standing, and how far away the gun was.

We have several possible suspects - any of Liam's ex-wives, Lindsey, some jealous person from work, the woman Liam was screwing on the side (or women).......you could even have it be Dru, since we don't know what she's been up to since Will left.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Okay, the evidence is working in both their favor-- but I have a bad feeling about what might happen before Buffy can "turn herself in," so to speak-- will the real killer try to stop that from happening? Maybe (s)he wants the case closed quickly? Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Okay, now I'm incredibly curious to see where this is going. I mean, I was at the beginning (obviously, otherwise I'd not still be reading), but 5 bullets?! Where did they come from?!

I'm glad that it's redeeming evidence for Spike and Buffy, however. :)*

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

So she's gonna confess now. I don't know if that's good or bad. The evidence doesn't convict neither of them however so I'm gonna remain hopeful. They should get out scotch free I think but no law degree or anything here. Can't wait to see what you write up next!!!

Reviewer: saradane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

You're killing me!
I've waited for updates since early on in this story and now they're coming rapid fire. You're making me as edgy as Buffy and Spike must feel.
That was NOT a complaint!
I wish all updates happened like this. Keeps the "in the moment" thing going on.
By all means keep it up. It's almost like reading a finished story that keeps you at your computer and neglecting things like showers and combing your hair.

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Woot! Go Fred!

Reviewer: Shauna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Wow, I had a lot of catching up to do.

So the question of who really shot Liam is looming large. And how did Will's prints get on the gun? I did read that correctly, didn't I?

I'm glad Buffy wants to do the right thing, but she and Will are kind of making a mess of things. If nothing else, it seems like Will would get in trouble for obstruction of justice.

Great update. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

What I really think is that this story is "masterfully written". I am finally writing a review *cringes, ducks and hides with shame & guilt*

I like it that I am able to breathe a little now as the police seem to be figuring out that there is another shooter. (I'm thinking ... starts with a "D") I really like how these two have gone above and beyond to prove their love for each other. Granted, at first they seemed ill suited for one another but now, they are definitely each other's soulmate. You have done an exceptional job of developing their characters individually as well as together. I am cheering for them all the way.

Another awesome tale by YOU. Sorry about not reviewing earlier. Such a greedy little reader I am. I love this story and I love your work, every bloody syllable. Thanks for working so hard. And thanks for ignoring the occasional "touched" individual. Some people just don't "get it". Thankfully most of us do!! just remember ... WE ARE MANY and they are few !! XOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

As usual you weave a wicked tale. I was wondering if Buffy's blind shots had even hit Liam. Another shooter makes sense. There must be a number of folks with motives, since our Liam was such a charmer....

Keep it up.

Sd

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

I want to know who did it!! Maybe a jealous mistress? Who? Who? Who?
I love this story you are doing a great job pulling it all together. Can't wait for the next update!







Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Tara is a good soul, she's very caring. And thinking ahead (the pics of the bruises).
Oh... another turn. (Not Darla being together with Lindsey. But eight bullets? And three in the wall. Mmmh Buffy didn't know if she hit Liam, she never saw. But now you keep me wondering who was there with a second gun. And more important: which bullet did kill Liam?
I really hope you can update tomorrow. If not, I'll wait :)

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Just got caught up on several chapters. Ooh it's all so exciting! I love a good murder mystery. I wonder who really killed Liam? Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Good chapter! Very mysterious. But i will take a wild guess as to who is the real killer. My guess is Darla, Spike's mother or Lindsey, his father's lawyer. At least now i can relax already knowing that there is still a chance for the two.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Buffy shot the wall and someone else shot Liam? Was it Darla? Or maybe whomever Liam's been boinking on the side.....But we didn't know for sure what had happened to Liam until Darla called Will to say he was dead, so it could have been anyone after Buffy left, since she didn't look at him at all.

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Hmm... plot thickens... even more...*

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

This is certainly a lovely little twist! 3 bullet in the wall and 5 in the body. I wonder who put the 5 in the body. I'm guessing the 3 is from Buffy. I just love this!! It's getting sooo interesting. Poor Spike though. He wasn't thinking very smartly when he turned himself in but he's in love. You don't always do the smart thing. I can't wait to see how things turn out!!! I'm so glad Tara took pictures!!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 03:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Excellent chapter with a hint of what's to come! I wonder who really did it?

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Ooooh! A neat little twist. :) Me gusta. But I can't help getting nervous about how Spike's acting-- I can totally understand why he'd be making that choice (I have zero problem with where you're taking this), but he's not acting enough like he's guilty!!! Detectives can hella tell when someone's falsely confesing. :P Buuuuuut of course you're throwing that in there! :) I just have this weird desire for it to go his way, but then for it NOT too-- and for the REAL killers to be found. Cauuuuuse that's how it's now appearing. Haha.

Reviewer: jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Okay, I totally get your explanation on why things are the way they are, plus, it seems like you've got a surprise coming with the extra bullets.

besides, I only comment, I don't write, but I love to read your stuff, so I trust your instincts anyway!

Reviewer: Jolynn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter One

Sweetie, just had to comment on your author note. Someone clued me in to how great is was, and sure enough, I loved it. You said it all and told them good and proper and I dare anyone to be such an idot as to flame you after that. Yah I know, it may still happen and they probably will whine and the wars can get ugly and stressful, but hell, you fired first and I love it.

We can write warnings longer than the constitution and put it in bold with highlights and flashing red beacons, and people either don't read them or think we don't really mean it, but you sure as hell did your best. Now you can say take a short walk on a long pier without any qualms.

Anyway, I haven't read the story, and for that I apologize, I've read your work and it is always brilliant. Problem is, I do my reading in the tub and the laptop doesn't fare well there. Still, I had to comment on the warning alone. Take a bow please for that intro. You had me LMAO and nodding my head in agreement at every precise, eloquent, typed in bold and capatilized word. Stick to your guns lady and don't ever let them get you down. Bravo Addie, well done.

Reviewer: Emily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

This was a great chapter. You have began new storylines very clearly without making it too much. I can't wait to see where you go with Gunn/Fred and see how Lindsay is going to come into play. Thanks for more of your fabulous work!

Reviewer: Dk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

So she was a lousy shot, I wonder who we should send a fruit basket too? Good chapter.

Reviewer: Dk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

So she was a lousy shot, I wonder who we should send a fruit basket too? Good chapter.

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