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Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Holy Tears

Such a sad start. But at least that gives me hope for a happy future!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 10:29 am Title: Holy Tears

I feel so bad for her. Such a heartbreaking thing to go through. And it sounds like Buffy's life before wasn't very good either. Hopefully she will tell William her story, and it will help some. More please.

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 03:49 am Title: Holy Tears

I'm crying here.. but I'm loving the story. More please!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Holy Tears

Poor Buffy. Will she ever get better? Update soon please!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 06:07 pm Title: Reach for Me.

It's so sad.

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Date: 11/18/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: October

Will she talk soon?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: How to Save a Life

Poor Buffy! She must be devastated.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 01:23 pm Title: Holy Tears

Oh my, so Lilly is indeed dead. Had to be, I knew that, yet to read she is? That makes it more real. At last she wasn't alone, was with her mother. *sniff* Even when Buffy is now speaking.
I'm glad I caught up with your story (for now). Looking forward to read more; can be I fall behind again but I'll catch up at some point.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 01:11 pm Title: Reach for Me.

Oh that's it, Buffy was hurt and Spike took care of her. I think Buffy has a long way to go till she'll be okay but William is there for her.
(Still loving the story.)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: October

Good that Parker called, especially that he noticed Buffy sitting there. They simply let Buffy go? But she was there first because of her baby.
Having no sleep at all? No wonder Buffy was so off.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 12:54 pm Title: How to Save a Life

*catching up* Oh, and happy belated birthday :)
Oh good, Buffy is still reacting. At last a little, she is not catatonic. Yet it seems she is lost in herself.
The call must be because of Buffy. Good the next chapter is up now.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Holy Tears

more please

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 03:30 am Title: Holy Tears

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Holy Tears

love the story, more please.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Holy Tears

Wow. Poor Buffy. She's so lucky to have William. "he worshipped her name with a whisper"--I love that sentence.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: Holy Tears

No fair making me cry! :(

That was so beautiful and sweet. I like that he relieved himself in the bathroom that way, he handled that quite well :) Great chapter babe.

Author's Response: hahaha you said handled :-) Sorry...had to. So yeah, I struggled with even putting that into this chapter. I thought that maybe it was inappropriate for the so far EXTREMELY somber mood of the story...then I thought I'm absolutely going to put this in here. William is at heart, I guy. Furthermore, he's a good guy. He wants to help Buffy because that's what he promised to do and he feels so sad for her but again, he's a GUY and Buffy's hot so he sees her, especially in her underwear, and his mind goes directly to MMMMM...Boobies! So him being a guy would NEED to work off a little bit of that unresolved tension :-)

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Holy Tears

Poor Buffy!!!What a sad powerful story!!! Plwase update soon!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 12:25 am Title: Reach for Me.

Poor Buffy. Poor William, too--he's so careful with her, so caring. Excellent chapter--love the banner, too!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 10:37 pm Title: Reach for Me.

Feeling bad for what Buffy must be going through. More please!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Reach for Me.

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Reach for Me.

aww that was really sweet, I love the way Spike takes care of her :) great job once again, please update soon ;)

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: Reach for Me.

And then Brat lunges into the story and hugs them both!

This is such a lovely story hon. I love that he let her get it out, sometimes that's all one needs to be able to do. I love him warring with himself about wanting to help her, but also being a guy and noticing her. this is so great.

Author's Response: And then Brat lunges into the story and hugs them both while Zeta follows with lots of tissues and chocolate because chocolate makes eveything better...true story. Thank you so much for all of your reviews sweetie. I'm honestly not trying to kiss your ass but you are one of my favorite authors so you have no idea how wonderful your praise makes me feel :o)

Reviewer: Christine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: Reach for Me.

Poor Buffy... I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 06:36 pm Title: Reach for Me.

Love it. William is so sweet helping her out. I feel for Buffy.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 06:03 pm Title: Reach for Me.

another great chapter... :D
and don't worry about still-not-speaking buffy. u just know how to make her speak through her actions... her whole body screams her pain.

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